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    My thoughts

    i'm jus an amateur tryin to freestyle
    Tryna see if rappin fits ma style
    im not tryin to be all hard
    cus that shits barred
    in ma raps
    thats all bullshit
    for nit titty tricks
    im gonna be me on this post
    n u can be u
    u can disect ma flow
    n one day i will blow
    up like 50 cent did after da 9 shots
    which everyone bought
    one to da face n one da brain
    which explains y hes so insane
    i dont understand y he talkin abt livin the ghetto lifestyle
    while he livin in miami lavishly
    n no im not indicatin no jelousy
    its jus i see him
    throwin parties by his pool while all these fools lookin at him
    thinkin he cool
    Man fuk G-Unit
    they spineless creatures
    they idiots treated like preachers
    to the youth of today
    put out some shit n now they feelin its their way
    i wont even apologize now
    n u ppl better not abide by these fools
    they like the dirty soles on ur shoes
    makem G-Unit shoes, cus they tru fools
    i knw i have gone off topic
    but man this is jus how its comin out
    or maybe the correct term is poppin out
    GGGGGGGGG-UUUNNit
    G-Unit fuked up
    they pluck-pluck
    they chickens, no more like hyenas
    ugly, hungry fukked up hyenas
    i apologize for the above line
    seeing i couldnt find anyting else to rhyme wit that line
    Hey, how abt i jus do tht
    rhyme wit da same word each n every time
    likes all these other so called rappers
    who put shit out n got pampered
    Fuk im runnin out of breath
    im sorry for goin on and on
    but its jus how it came out
    so now ill bow out
    hope u enjoyed ma time out

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    nah... anyways... man you gotta up ya structure, try to put more words in your lines or something, and up your vocab, (get a dictionary)... look at other peoples drops in OM and see what they do and you can get a feel for it...
    stay up and try to elevate.. 1
    :.Apollo .:

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    *eyes feel so heavy*im high and im readin stupid shit...dont freestyle somthing if its gonna suck this bad....take your time adn try again...and pick a solid topic...check out the link in my sig titled When the Sky Falls...id appreciate it.~1~


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