bitch it's O.G., illest nigga ever, in my town im tha king, and since this ur majesty u know that i only sleep w/ queens, but creep with things, knock a nigga out good nite bitch sweet dreams, and i stay with 9's, and AK's mounted with infra-red beams, and im aimin at u if u aint on my team, if ya aint bout cheese, and if u aint bout cheese get the fuck from round me, i'm claimin GD and got love for C's, so if yallfeelin me throw up 8 B
No... not really a good verse
you gotta up the vocab, structure, and flow....
Don't type ya shit in paragrah form...lol
stay up and keep elevatin... payce
:.Apollo .:
topic was weak....rhyme scheme and wordplay were elementary....your structure looks like your writin somebody a letter....one line ontop of the other...first line..enter...second line...enter..etc.etc.etc...keep elevatin and would you hit up the link in my sig titled When the Sky Falls..id appreciate it.~1~
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