the bowdoin streets

[pnutgottheox]

bowdoin were u dont learn how to run fast cuz u tryin to be a runnin back/
but u run fast cuz the cops was on ur ass and u got a package of crack/
bowdoin were we be on the block night and day/
any type of weather either catchin snowflakes/
or on the benches smokin haze takin in sunrays/
kids is playin hide and seek gettin in fights if u peekin/
were them project girls is on the hunt 4 doe and they stay freakin/
and if u stressed out like marvin gaye u can get u some sexual healin/
gettin drunk on hot days and cold days but year round we stay dealin/
the bowdoin streets them haters caps we stay peelin/
sellin trees or white it aint a hobby its a job/
and everyday the feens stay on ur dick like corn on the cob/
bowdoin were my team rise like the water in venace/
bowdoin were to society pnut stay a fuckin menace/
bowdoin wish it was the start cuz i dont want this song to finish/



a banger 4 yall

[sILLable]

way too simple...you need to incorporate some more comlexity in your piece...every aspect..needs elevation...keep elevatin and droppin...and read tha rules in here before you post.~1`

[Bugzy Vendetta]

let em know about the block p, shit is real u spitten nutten but truth rite now my nigga
keep doing wat u do and keep it realest 2 death holla at ya boy

[:.Apollo.:]

it was ok in someparts, in others it was just wack...
upp tha vocab, structure is iite,
Try to make ya rhyme flow together a bit more as well, make sure the ending words rhyme from line to line in a way that all know how it is spose to sound..
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[:.Apollo.:]

decent drop

[SunSpit]

Diz drop was aight. Feelin it in some parts. I like how u talkin real shit tho. Juss up your vocab., multi's, n structure which will help out da flow. Keep droppin n elevatin. 1