Techcity VS Case Closed(leaders' battle)
10-15 lines
house rules
blind spit
verse due 2 hours after checkin
totwotoo
Cypher
Techcity VS Case Closed(leaders' battle)
10-15 lines
house rules
blind spit
verse due 2 hours after checkin
oh yeah the deadline's today midnight
i most likely will drop before midnight(EST). but if i dont .. could u give me an extension for like 2 hours after midnight.. thx.. peace
aighjt only if i get an extention cuz i'm busy
i got to kill ya wit much tech two leadas to take ya down
too many soljas to to deal with thats why it's not called techtown
it's a vendetta so i'll leave ya in the cold twisted like cheddar
saw ur battles and in sarcasm i dearly say cud u be any better?
this kid's outfitted both ways and he only fits in his night gown
so shut the fuk up pull up 10 chairs and sit ur ass down
ok bad verse up top but u gon have perpentual losses superimposed
one by one starting now u'll lose battles and shut up cuz the case's closed.
yo sry dude i'm just not in da mood for batles today hit me up some time later we'll have another battle.
ch check!
ill drop as many as you
your verse? line it, his talent? wack doesnt define it
cuz his rhymes so hore-ibble...
...throw it on the street, fo sure youll find it
ill break ya flows spine, cuz arent you tired always bein back
his name even admits, he always follows up on raps
you a pussy girl, how can you please to aim, with lame game?
i'll be MessinHer Instant, once i pop after i AIM
your key makes me board, i aint feel it like im on num lock
you beat the drifter?...
...damn you aint only dickride you suck the whole damn cock
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yo cuz dat two nigga merked his opponent u feel me no hate 2 any 1 but he just came alot harder wit da punchez n shit u feel me like i said no hate but he really did good cypher u did iight 2 cuz but u gotta come harder wit yo punchez and work on yo structure 2 get into a better flow wit yo shit
v/two
your verse? line it, his talent? wack doesnt define it
cuz his rhymes so hore-ibble...
...throw it on the street, fo sure youll find it
nice
ill break ya flows spine, cuz arent you tired always bein back
his name even admits, he always follows up on raps
ok
you a pussy girl, how can you please to aim, with lame game?
i'll be MessinHer Instant, once i pop after i AIM
decent
your key makes me board, i aint feel it like im on num lock
you beat the drifter?...
...damn you aint only dickride you suck the whole damn cock
ok
not bad verse good structure , flow was good, creativity was also good, vocab could be better, I thought those punches hit harder and thats another reason why you got my vote.
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i got to kill ya wit much tech two leadas to take ya down
too many soljas to to deal with thats why it's not called techtown
no
it's a vendetta so i'll leave ya in the cold twisted like cheddar
saw ur battles and in sarcasm i dearly say cud u be any better?
ok
this kid's outfitted both ways and he only fits in his night gown
so shut the fuk up pull up 10 chairs and sit ur ass down
no never
ok bad verse up top but u gon have perpentual losses superimposed
one by one starting now u'll lose battles and shut up cuz the case's closed.
ok
I think you should actually come up with punching at your opponent instead of telling him to shut the fuck up all the time. thats not even a diss thats somthing i would say to my brother. structure was ok, vocab needs to step up and wordplay.
vote - ToTwoToo
yo cuz dat two nigga merked his opponent u feel me no hate 2 any 1 but he just came alot harder wit da punchez n shit u feel me like i said no hate but he really did good cypher u did iight 2 cuz but u gotta come harder wit yo punchez and work on yo structure 2 get into a better flow wit yo shit
v/two
TNL
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