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no feedin
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blind spit
word...........
Janksta
Chain
10-14 lines
due in a hour
no dick ridin
no bitin
no feedin
no hate votes
no crew votes
blind spit
word...........
checkin...........................................
Aight , Check dis , Dis small tymer tryin ta take on da Big Rhymer
Carrying a million on my back , he thinks he can just talk smack , but look who aint got da crack. When Day turns ta night , he begins ta fright , He slipps out of our sight and is neva seen again in a fight. I tell ya ta cover your face son cause I am bringin out da big guns .Yeah , I live life in a fast lane , always carrying a golden cane , showing you who's da mayne. I would be ridin in da hottest clubs , rideing in my fastest Dubs. Yeah , when it comes too it , I would be rushin in my rhymes and all da dawgs would be throwin me their dymes , wishin for da good ol tymez. You small tyme rappers are starting too bug me now , but cha be da ones who are thuggin it now. I will move ya out of my light so I can show you how too fight da right way . This is just another tyme when I am gonna bust out another rhyme.
I am tha Big Rhymer
Small Tymer , keeping
Beats tru too the streets.
kid got no skill and he says he can beat me whatup Janksta
says he's a gangsta bitch wit them rhymes your a low class wanksta
your from alaska and you say you can rap you just a white boy
this bitch ass faggot ain't a big timer your just a dads toy
what the fuck why would you say your a small timer
ain't it always cold in alaska so how you gonna bring the fire
your a noweight and your so weak that i'ma become 9-0
heres a secret your crew don't really want your ass ho
he just pmed me askin "how do i battle on the computer" wow
bitch shut your fuckin mouth how the fuck you gonna talk shit now
he pmed me and asked how do you battle on the computer
he just got accepted into Low Profile Gangstas
and he from alaska
lol i didn't need much hahahaha
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Well , it seems as though this is a tie , cause no one is voteing .
I am tha Big Rhymer
Small Tymer , keeping
Beats tru too the streets.
yo nice battle if icould vote it would to chain go tryout for ill tactics
Wack Battle Both Need Hard Punches Need Better Wordin Need Better Everything Ya Flow Was Of And Ya Opener And Closer Were Bad Both Need To Work On Punchlines Alout Chain Won Cause His Hits Hit Harder Slightly Jangsta Was To Wack To Off Flow Dis Battle Was Wack Any Way V/c
Wack Battle Both Need Hard Punches Need Better Wordin Need Better Everything Ya Flow Was Of And Ya Opener And Closer Were Bad Both Need To Work On Punchlines Alout Chain Won Cause His Hits Hit Harder Slightly Jangsta Was To Wack To Off Flow Dis Battle Was Wack Any Way both need to elevate
V/chain
TNL
ait battle
i wasnt really feelin it from either side, but janksta u need serious work on ur structure and flow and maybe a cuple stronger punches in ur verse, chain u had sume nice pinches and probly had the best line in tha battle but u need 2 use personals to add extra power to ur punch
\\//ote chain
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janksta-your structure was very wack cuz its unorganized and its hard to tell when one rhyme end and or starts.your rhymes were weak and basic.you didnt have a punch in your verse.your flow was wack.you didn't have creativity on your verse.you had threats in your verse,wich made your verse weaker than it already is.
chain-your structure was good compared to janksta's cuz its easier to read and its organized.you had nice and decent punches your flow was eh.your creativity on your verse was nice.you did good on attackin him personally.
vote.chain.
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final up lookin for 1 more vote
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