azn six vs The problem

[azn six]

alrite.....
10-14 lines......
verses dues 15 min after check in......
MUST EXPLAIN VOTES CLEARLY.......
here i go....

[azn six]

ayo i gota PROBLEM with this cat, first sight i realize hes too bitch made//
and u kno the rules, u gota go, as soon as i choose between my gun and my switchblade//

either way i do it, itll be so ill this cat will be afraid to diss//
come back with dry tongue spit, all his shots go missed//

hands shake from the way i grip my fist, or the way it feels when my blade pokes his ribs//
i do it double handed to rock his body like a baby crib//

it was a huge mistake to go after me, i kno boys that will murder for free//
send em to ur city, turn this kill to drug deal the way u scram like half a key//

i wont be done when ur bodies hurt and bled, not even when i confirm ur dead//
once u lose conciousness, ill check ya pockets like i rub a buddah head//

when they find ya body therell be no clues, no ID, no attempt to med//
all hope of keepin u alive dies out from the sight of u swimmin in a puddle of red//


this bitch got merked, this bitch got knocked out, and this bitch got robbed//
and this all happened in one battle, i guess its PROBLEM SOLVED//

[azn six]

check in before u spit unless u already started

[The problem]

i will seriously kill you and im not talkin bloody stuff
hit u of with hard punches like if someone got snuff
ur verse want drop hard cause ur just a noweight
his vers doesn't connect,wen he punch its not straight
attacking u direct, so u better find a way to stop me
cuz if you don, ur face will be like a bad case of ack-nee
ill have your verse dead, put to close n have it outline
let ma punches put strips in you like the end of ur line
nice is something that your not, so don't even say it
cause everyone knows your wack,......just fucking quit

damn im tired im out. this is the worste

[azn six]

uppin 4 votes

[The problem]

uppin 1...............................................

[The problem]

come peples vote in this battle and will vote in yah battles

[MetaSin]

okay punches thrown which is what I like to see nice battle but there must be a winner the break down:

pUNCHES:Tp

Personalz:azn

Flow:azn

Complexity:Tp

Creativity:Tp

overall:Nice battle but The Problem takes it he had punches hittin and that what wins battles

v/Tp

[BLUNT WRAP]

Azn- Wack Battle Bad Punches Bad Vocab Okay Wording Ya Direct Hits Were Not Good Ya Verse Were Kiddish No Good Hits Nothing Impressive Overall 2/10

Problem-same Thing As Azn You Lacked Alout But Ya Flow Was Better And Ya Hits Were Harder Both Of Ya Need To Work On Everything Ya Punches Were Real Weak Come Harder Overall 3/10

Vote For The P, For Better Flow And Harder Hits

[T-Time]

azn- u had horrible structure homey, but i liked yo flow, ur punches were iight u need to elevate... overall 3/10

tp- u had way betta structure and ur punches were harder, not real hard but harder to beat this dude, yo flow was pretty good to ... overall 5/10

vote-tp

[Cypher]

nice battle keep it problem,

[The problem]

uppin 3..............................................

[azn six]

uppin

[the definition]

azn- u had pretty bad punches, ya flow was okay, but you really need to work on hitting harder. and also icorparating rhymes into your punches.

prob-u were okay, okay punches, not great flow, okay rhyme scheme,
it wasnt anything real special but it won

both yall need to elevate but im votin for da problem for better punches

[Camilo]

ayo i gota PROBLEM with this cat, first sight i realize hes too bitch made//
and u kno the rules, u gota go, as soon as i choose between my gun and my switchblade//
no
either way i do it, itll be so ill this cat will be afraid to diss//
come back with dry tongue spit, all his shots go missed//
no
hands shake from the way i grip my fist, or the way it feels when my blade pokes his ribs//
i do it double handed to rock his body like a baby crib//
no
it was a huge mistake to go after me, i kno boys that will murder for free//
send em to ur city, turn this kill to drug deal the way u scram like half a key//
no
i wont be done when ur bodies hurt and bled, not even when i confirm ur dead//
once u lose conciousness, ill check ya pockets like i rub a buddah head//
no
this bitch got merked, this bitch got knocked out, and this bitch got robbed//
and this all happened in one battle, i guess its PROBLEM SOLVED//
no

i will seriously kill you and im not talkin bloody stuff
hit u of with hard punches like if someone got snuff
no
ur verse want drop hard cause ur just a noweight
his vers doesn't connect,wen he punch its not straight
no
attacking u direct, so u better find a way to stop me
cuz if you don, ur face will be like a bad case of ack-nee
no
ill have your verse dead, put to close n have it outline
let ma punches put strips in you like the end of ur line
no
nice is something that your not, so don't even say it
cause everyone knows your wack,......just fucking quit
no

battle-very weak verse from both sides.problem had a good structure compared to azn.both of you had no punches on your verse.problem attempted creativity but it was weak azn did not.both of your flow was bad.personals=none.vote problem for attempted creativity eventhough it was weak.