10-16 lines
30mins
after check in
you drop first
gemneye
Lo-Ki
10-16 lines
30mins
after check in
you drop first
checked
lets git er dunn
Hoaky dokey ass Lo-Ki, he'd need a bed-sheet to smoke me
Too much of a bitch to be something, so he's just keeping it low-key
The scale is reading nothing because he's got no weight
Not to mention he's on my dick like it's a tube of colgate
Trying to roll around and shine, I'll put a pop in them spokes
"Damn I better take a dive, this niggaz got ten posts!"
Because we know your shit is played, a ghost is grippin' your pen
If I wanted to cut your dick your mom'd get kicked in her chin
It's just your odds are 'bout as good as a midge hittin' free throws
Youve just been broken like your name, y'know its supposed to be "KI-LO"
checked in..............................................
first victim….get left in the rear of a hearse twitching
u get them dead jitters,
the verse hits him like slugs we call em head critters
get fed dinners…of hot shit
I don’t throw punches I clothes-lines and dropkick
Rico's sick...he sold victs...fine powder,
and im not talkin chico sticks
my rhyme powers is to eat foes quick
ridiculous kilo bricks, in the form of freeflow spits
and son em like they swam outta my meathole/dick
he co-writ the book on how to repo cliques
and run with foreign themes
ya shit aint dope, it never warrants fiends
my shit aint taupe, its quarantined...off-white
u the soft type, i got the cure for frostbite…toss mics!
Hoaky dokey ass Lo-Ki, he'd need a bed-sheet to smoke me
Too much of a bitch to be something, so he's just keeping it low-key
The scale is reading nothing because he's got no weight
Not to mention he's on my dick like it's a tube of colgate
Trying to roll around and shine, I'll put a pop in them spokes
"Damn I better take a dive, this niggaz got ten posts!"
Because we know your shit is played, a ghost is grippin' your pen
If I wanted to cut your dick your mom'd get kicked in her chin
It's just your odds are 'bout as good as a midge hittin' free throws
Youve just been broken like your name, y'know its supposed to be "KI-LO"
vs.
first victim….get left in the rear of a hearse twitching
u get them dead jitters,
the verse hits him like slugs we call em head critters
get fed dinners…of hot shit
I don’t throw punches I clothes-lines and dropkick
Rico's sick...he sold victs...fine powder,
and im not talkin chico sticks
my rhyme powers is to eat foes quick
ridiculous kilo bricks, in the form of freeflow spits
and son em like they swam outta my meathole/dick
he co-writ the book on how to repo cliques
and run with foreign themes
ya shit aint dope, it never warrants fiends
my shit aint taupe, its quarantined...off-white
u the soft type, i got the cure for frostbite…toss mics!
gem-your verse was okay you had some punches and personals like the multi's and the verse was good 7/10
loki- your verse was hot iliked the punches and the wordplay, liked the multi's just put some personals in ya verse 9/10
V/lo-ki for better punches and overall verse
TNL
Hoaky dokey ass Lo-Ki, he'd need a bed-sheet to smoke me
Too much of a bitch to be something, so he's just keeping it low-key
The scale is reading nothing because he's got no weight
Not to mention he's on my dick like it's a tube of colgate
Trying to roll around and shine, I'll put a pop in them spokes
"Damn I better take a dive, this niggaz got ten posts!"
VS.
first victim….get left in the rear of a hearse twitching
u get them dead jitters,
the verse hits him like slugs we call em head critters
get fed dinners…of hot shit
I don’t throw punches I clothes-lines and dropkick
Rico's sick...he sold victs...fine powder,
and im not talkin chico sticks
my rhyme powers is to eat foes quick
gemneye - do you actually put colgate on your dick?? the flow was good. elevate on the punches i think. the structure needed mad elevation man. the complexity was pretty decent and the creativity i gotta say it was good cause it was the first time ive heard the colgate. 7/10
loki- i liked your verse. the flow was on lock down. the punches were hittin shit like mad crazy. the structure was dope i like the overall complexity and creativity. to rap this shit up fast you had a pretty dope battle. 8/10
v/ loki
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uppin............................................. ....
gemneye did good, the flow was good. elevate on the punches i think. the structure needed mad elevation man. the complexity was pretty decent and the creativity i gotta say it was good but loki i liked your verse betta, the flow was on lock down. the punches were hittin harder and the structure was dope i like the overall complexity and creativity. thats why im goin for loki because his punches hit harder. good battle
v/ loki
Good battle cant vote in crew
uppin............................................. ......
loki-that was nice hid good use of multies a so-so flow some great personmals your punches warent tht good but your verse was good about 7/10 keep it up kid good job
gem- you had multies wicb wefre ok some nice punches an ok structure and a decent flow
flow:loki
punches:loki
personals:gem
multies:loki [not more just better]
complex:loki
I have 2 give this one 2 lo-ki because his style was hot I like the way you wrote the verse it made it very easy 2 read and flow was great punches where aight but stayed witty throughout and strong finish, gem your verse was solid but not enough 2 come back with the win, sorry truely no hate much love, big ups & VOTE ON THE LINKS!!!!! HIT EM UP...
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