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Artifact
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*good luck*
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Let The Pen Bleed So My Wrists Don't
Death does not concern us, because as long as we exist, death is not here. And when it does come, we no longer exist
that's b/s man..is this still a blind
..I'm So Fuckin' Hoody..!
fuck this homie.....you bull shittin...now i have to wait....20 more min...
..I'm So Fuckin' Hoody..!
just drop im done ill drop right afta u..................................
Let The Pen Bleed So My Wrists Don't
Death does not concern us, because as long as we exist, death is not here. And when it does come, we no longer exist
omfg ...... dude this isnt a blind nemore i have to come wid somethign quick didnt copy and paste before i posted the last thign i said :'(
Let The Pen Bleed So My Wrists Don't
Death does not concern us, because as long as we exist, death is not here. And when it does come, we no longer exist
check it......
So ur punches? my bars avoid my breathe so sick ill turn ya Sars to voids
Cuz battlin me is Beyond Ya Image like women wantin to be barbie toys
He kicks more "throwback" concepts than old school replica Jordans
Illest? naw quiet the opposite
.............b/c ya shit get slept on more than "narcoleptics on toilets"
The smashin is dealt and this asshole's banned like Magic,vanished & fearing fights
This punch a low blow cuz Art a few inches bigger and I'm not comparing heights
ur the spokesman for the lyrically retarded & verbally lost
governor arnold could read ya shit & still see that the wording's off
You came to battle thas a gay show for ya'll only fear of this guy is from baked pies
This fake lies cuz Illest Tryin Ta See Art is just a Queer Eye for the Straight-Guy
..I'm So Fuckin' Hoody..!
Artifact is a good name for u cause u've been long forgotten
Rhymes r rotten, they'r cheap like cotton, were misbegotten*
Spittin brutality, showin this kid he cant beat me n its reality
Cant touch me, i can touch u proven u dont have immortality
U have a pussy not a dick, kid dickrides anyone with a record
Welcome aboard the train of ur next lose, this kid is stupid....
.......trying to commit suicide with a imaginary telephone cord
Look at his shit, those rhymes should be exticnt like ur name
This kid wants fame but ur a shame, its not u to blame.......
........its ur feeble mind that likes to find loses then claim em
Dam dud i agree ur sick, look at u skrawny lil lightweight......
.................this kid couldn't be a havey wieght if he was fat
Kid u bite more then mosqitoes but it ends here.......SPLAT!
* born in wedlock
lol deleted ladt one by accident ......
so heres something quick sorry aobut that didnt copy n paste ... my first one
Let The Pen Bleed So My Wrists Don't
Death does not concern us, because as long as we exist, death is not here. And when it does come, we no longer exist
uuuuuupppppiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn 111111111111
Let The Pen Bleed So My Wrists Don't
Death does not concern us, because as long as we exist, death is not here. And when it does come, we no longer exist
So ur punches? my bars avoid my breathe so sick ill turn ya Sars to voids
Cuz battlin me is Beyond Ya Image like women wantin to be barbie toys
could've came harder with that barbie doll line
He kicks more "throwback" concepts than old school replica Jordans
Illest? naw quiet the opposite
.............b/c ya shit get slept on more than "narcoleptics on toilets"
is it Jordan with Toilet. doesnt rhyme to me. but good wordplay
The smashin is dealt and this asshole's banned like Magic,vanished & fearing fights
This punch a low blow cuz Art a few inches bigger and I'm not comparing heights
lol at best
ur the spokesman for the lyrically retarded & verbally lost
governor arnold could read ya shit & still see that the wording's off
too forced with the arnold bit
You came to battle thas a gay show for ya'll only fear of this guy is from baked pies
This fake lies cuz Illest Tryin Ta See Art is just a Queer Eye for the Straight-Guy
decent wordplay. not a good closer
vs
ill:
Artifact is a good name for u cause u've been long forgotten
Rhymes r rotten, they'r cheap like cotton, were misbegotten*
too forced. doesnt sound natural for an opener
Spittin brutality, showin this kid he cant beat me n its reality
Cant touch me, i can touch u proven u dont have immortality
nope. not feeling it
U have a pussy not a dick, kid dickrides anyone with a record
Welcome aboard the train of ur next lose, this kid is stupid....
.......trying to commit suicide with a imaginary telephone cord
tried to use the cordless phone line.
Look at his shit, those rhymes should be exticnt like ur name
This kid wants fame but ur a shame, its not u to blame.......
........its ur feeble mind that likes to find loses then claim em
are you dissing feeble minded?
Dam dud i agree ur sick, look at u skrawny lil lightweight......
.................this kid couldn't be a havey wieght if he was fat
Kid u bite more then mosqitoes but it ends here.......SPLAT!
nope.
I felt a much more consistent flow in art's altough he used decent wordplay only in some bars and decided to use basic rhymes scheme in the next. if you gonna you multis and shit, you might as well do all your lines with multis coz if not it seems as if you invented that bar a couple of months ago and dropped them here and now.
Ill your flow i wasnt feeling as much coz it looked like your punches were too stretched in some cases making it seem like 3 lines. it just doesn't flow correctly though it was decent attempt i guess.
v/ artifact
dam lol uppin.....................................
Let The Pen Bleed So My Wrists Don't
Death does not concern us, because as long as we exist, death is not here. And when it does come, we no longer exist
ups on 1
..I'm So Fuckin' Hoody..!
So ur punches? my bars avoid my breathe so sick ill turn ya Sars to voids
Cuz battlin me is Beyond Ya Image like women wantin to be barbie toys
good
He kicks more "throwback" concepts than old school replica Jordans
Illest? naw quiet the opposite
.............b/c ya shit get slept on more than "narcoleptics on toilets"
ok ok
The smashin is dealt and this asshole's banned like Magic,vanished & fearing fights
This punch a low blow cuz Art a few inches bigger and I'm not comparing heights
funny line
ur the spokesman for the lyrically retarded & verbally lost
governor arnold could read ya shit & still see that the wording's off
attepmted punch, but was ok
You came to battle thas a gay show for ya'll only fear of this guy is from baked pies
This fake lies cuz Illest Tryin Ta See Art is just a Queer Eye for the Straight-Guy
not a good closer but ok
vs
ill:
Artifact is a good name for u cause u've been long forgotten
Rhymes r rotten, they'r cheap like cotton, were misbegotten*
sounds da same and wasnt feelin it so much
Spittin brutality, showin this kid he cant beat me n its reality
Cant touch me, i can touch u proven u dont have immortality
no
U have a pussy not a dick, kid dickrides anyone with a record
Welcome aboard the train of ur next lose, this kid is stupid....
.......trying to commit suicide with a imaginary telephone cord
that was ok
Look at his shit, those rhymes should be exticnt like ur name
This kid wants fame but ur a shame, its not u to blame.......
........its ur feeble mind that likes to find loses then claim em
it was a lil off at the end
Dam dud i agree ur sick, look at u skrawny lil lightweight......
.................this kid couldn't be a havey wieght if he was fat
Kid u bite more then mosqitoes but it ends here.......SPLAT!
WHAT DA FUCK HOMIE, SPLAT, LOL, HELL NO NIGGA
v/artifact
ups on 2
..I'm So Fuckin' Hoody..!
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