10 linez exactly
verse due ASAP
checkin due ASAP
no d/r
no c/v
no h/v
and no bullshit
this is my check in herb ass bitch
PopUpPirate
MetaSin
10 linez exactly
verse due ASAP
checkin due ASAP
no d/r
no c/v
no h/v
and no bullshit
this is my check in herb ass bitch
CHeCk CH CHeCKIN iN
BRing it
"When you meet with a sudden shower you try not to get wet, but by doing things such as passing under the eaves of houses you still get wet. When you are resolved from the beginning you will not be perplexed, though you will still get the same soaking. This understanding extends to all things"
Hagukure
yo hes stupid as hell cause I can stock up proper
bring it! oh yeah you can't I got "PopUp" blocker
nigga don't you know O-Town is already embarassed
for you steppin up to me and you aint bein cahrrished
see ya name aint dope at all cause you are a piece of shit
and the frontlines is a ground combat zone "Pirates" stay on ships
The shit you spit is nothin to anyother so close ya shutters,
when you see me cause before the battle started I made u stutter
Ch ch ch ch checkin in and please make this worth the while
I bet right now he aint got shit to say ao he lookin at my file
Your rhymes make no sense, this kid got dyslexia/
you not phat, you only spit sick like anorexia/
listen son, it’s about time you “retire” from this game/
cos your rhymes so old they don’t stand up without a zimmer frame/
my flows like a laxative cos I make your ass run/
but you can’t say “shit” cos your rhymes are forced like constipation/
battlin with me kid you be damn unlucky/
cos it’s “childs play” for me to cut you up like “Chuckie”/
I may be a no-weight but im phat so my weight risin/
My punches hit hard like Hollyfield, you just “bitin” like Tyson/
SHIT
"When you meet with a sudden shower you try not to get wet, but by doing things such as passing under the eaves of houses you still get wet. When you are resolved from the beginning you will not be perplexed, though you will still get the same soaking. This understanding extends to all things"
Hagukure
played ass lines lol lets get some votes in please~1~
where can i find your battle with sinamen? search came up with nothin?
"When you meet with a sudden shower you try not to get wet, but by doing things such as passing under the eaves of houses you still get wet. When you are resolved from the beginning you will not be perplexed, though you will still get the same soaking. This understanding extends to all things"
Hagukure
Pop uppin for votes
"When you meet with a sudden shower you try not to get wet, but by doing things such as passing under the eaves of houses you still get wet. When you are resolved from the beginning you will not be perplexed, though you will still get the same soaking. This understanding extends to all things"
Hagukure
Your rhymes make no sense, this kid got dyslexia/
you not phat, you only spit sick like anorexia/
nice vocab but no that great
listen son, it’s about time you “retire” from this game/
cos your rhymes so old they don’t stand up without a zimmer frame/
ok
my flows like a laxative cos I make your ass run/
but you can’t say “shit” cos your rhymes are forced like constipation/
didnt even rhyme homeboi
battlin with me kid you be damn unlucky/
cos it’s “childs play” for me to cut you up like “Chuckie”/
played out but ok
I may be a no-weight but im phat so my weight risin/
My punches hit hard like Hollyfield, you just “bitin” like Tyson/
ehh..a lil played out
v
yo hes stupid as hell cause I can stock up proper
bring it! oh yeah you can't I got "PopUp" blocker
nice
nigga don't you know O-Town is already embarassed
for you steppin up to me and you aint bein cahrrished
ok
see ya name aint dope at all cause you are a piece of shit
and the frontlines is a ground combat zone "Pirates" stay on ships
ok, ok
The shit you spit is nothin to anyother so close ya shutters,
when you see me cause before the battle started I made u stutter
not much of a punchline ta me
Ch ch ch ch checkin in and please make this worth the while
I bet right now he aint got shit to say ao he lookin at my file
not really a great closer
yall both was aight, popup pirate came in with some decent vocab but some of his punches were played out. metasin came in with some decent punches at popup pirate, not the best but was ok
v/ metasin
oh i see that you did rhyme tha "ass run" and "constipation" mah fault homie......aw well mah vote stays the same thoughOriginally Posted by StevieFresh
upping
uppin for votes please
yeah i looked at this battle and his rhymes might have been played to you but they were good to me you had good punchlines also you guysd got to learn how to stop hating on everything you see and if you read this and start laughing and say something smart right now you hating it's that deep think about it the pirate had lines after lines after line with his punches I had to wait for you to set yours up both of you guys structure were good and thats a good thing keep that up my vote is for the pirate guy
first of all he gives u clues that it was pre written like not usin my name for example it had absolutley no personals
Uppin PopUppin for votes lick my balls punk
"When you meet with a sudden shower you try not to get wet, but by doing things such as passing under the eaves of houses you still get wet. When you are resolved from the beginning you will not be perplexed, though you will still get the same soaking. This understanding extends to all things"
Hagukure
Uppin Uppin
"When you meet with a sudden shower you try not to get wet, but by doing things such as passing under the eaves of houses you still get wet. When you are resolved from the beginning you will not be perplexed, though you will still get the same soaking. This understanding extends to all things"
Hagukure
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