(Team Battle Pt.2)Insane Vs. Gray ~Hott Battle~

[~CRoNiK~]

Ayo,

Max: 5 bars (10 lines)

No dickriding,hate,crew votes

No biting,feeding,recycling

P.S- check-in due right away gray spits 1rst
...............due 15 mins after check-in


Good Luck

[Gray]

check

[Gray]

Losing Hurts.. I Smell A Sence That Ya Suck… Don’t Spit Ya Verse
Stunned Faggot Is Burnt.. Send This Maggot To The Employment Office, Cause Ya Rappin Needs Work!-

Im On The Top-List Of Spittin This And Knockin Faces To The Pavment-
You Arranged This? Ill Show You A "DarkCide" When Ya Get Smacked By My "Dark Click"-

Late-Hits Disable The Way You Could Spit That "Hott Shit"
Ill Freeze ya And Give You An "IcyFlow" Like I Just Popped A Breath-Mint-

Vocabulary Makes ya "Freeze Out" Cuz Im Hott Like The Devils Throat -
My "AllignMent" Makes Ya "Lose Ya Count" So Don’t "Tremble" When You "See" The Votes -

You "Slowly Wrote" I'll Accelerate And Replace Ya Poor-Timing Case-
By Ignialating Ya Brain Should "Erase" And Embrace Ya Will A "Change Of Pase"-

[lyrically_insane]

Check and........

Watch me drop shots to stop yall right in your fagget tracks
I should hand yall some Q-Tips kuz yall straight full'o "wacks"
I cause explosions wide erosions to stop yall chosen function
Waige destruction Ill sink in Grays chest like breast reduction
Ill slice and dice ya dykes then Cronik will whip yall with mics
Kuz yall punches are missing...step away from the "darkside"
Watch me mix this diss with steady streaming hitting fists!!
Precausing my kicks to "vaporize" this kid faster than Vicks
Ill blow rows of bows to your head instead damage ya direct
After im thru with "gray" his new color would be dead on "Red"

Quick drop

[Gray]

nice verse.. lets get some votes

[Red_]

gray-overall an ok verse some punches but nuttin that really came hard and ur flow ws aiight and the structure was ok 2 need work on punches and perosnals
5/10

insane-nice verse ur punches were more effective and the wordplay was good as well and u kept a cosistent flow ur personals were nice as well
7/10

v/insane

[~CRoNiK~]

decent shit from both, now get the votes uppin (O AND GRAY TELL UR TEAMMATE TO FUCKIN RESPOND IN ARE BATTLE CAUSE HES SILENT AS A FUCKIN GHOST)

[Gray]

i pmed him...hes not respondin

[~CRoNiK~]

EXACTLY FUCK IT HE PUSSED OUT.....WANNA VS ME? HAHA....j/p unless u want too cause im pissed and u tell him he owes u if u do vs me

[Gray]

yeah ill battle u but is it cool if we do it tommorow cuz im bout to go to bed

[~CRoNiK~]

dayam i was wanting to tonight but go ahead homie u held up ur end peace ~1~

[UnMerkable]

vote-insane

flow-insane
punches-insane
personals-insane
multies-insane
structure-insane

i think insane just got you in everything even tho your verse was dope homie

OVERALL
gray-6/10
insane-9/10

[.Silence.]

Lyrically insane-took this one cuz he had good hard punches and personals.He also has multis in his verse and a good complex structure.overall he came hard on this battle but I've seen him come harder than this in a battle no hate insane.But he kill this battle easy.

Gray-No hate but I think you could have came harder on your punches and personals in your verse.Another thing your structure was ok but I think you can do better.You had good wordplay though in your verse but it wasn't good enough to take Lyrically insane down.Just work on your structure and come with harder punches and you'll be straight.

vote-Lyrically insane

[SpAy]

insane-nice mayne ur punches were nice ur flow was consistent the ending was nice as well and my fav punch was the breast reduction one overall ur verse was nice and consistent and the personals were nice as well 8/10

vs

gray-ur verse was aight nuttin special u had some good punches here and there but the flow fell off a few times overall it was aight but u need to come harder with ur punches and more personals and the ending was meh 5/10

v/insane

[da_image]

i would have to go with insane on this one nice flow homie.....