1lyricist (RI) vs +..Nightmare..+ (PB)

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Crew Battle: Raw Image vs Pandora's Box

1lyricist vs +..Nightmare..+

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You guys agree on line limits... both checkin, a.s.a.p.

Due Date will be set for Midnight on Wednesday.. both should be able to drop sometime before then, any problems persist an extensive may be allowed.

Goodluck to both.

[Night Mare]

10 Lines

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[Keyser]

yeah sure, good job u showed otherwise i wouldnt of dropped, no biting, d/r etc, i am gonna drop my verse before your midnight time in u.s thats all, guess this is my check.

[Keyser]

ok i have 3 n half hours to drop you have 7 n half, unless u wanna make it same time as my deadline, up to you, good luck.

[Keyser]

Nite we see no evil and hear no evil, weak name and it aint required
Your verse is laughable, with more amusment seen from richard pryor
Your not worth a forum, the skills to beat me?..............bitch please
Drop your played lines, refresh..... and use em in the jr lyricist league
Alike to the bombings in london its a shock when you see this kid rap
When you got recruited to pandoras box, shit must of been a misshap
I've seen more stuff on a maxipad the way this bitch ever gets flowing
This dudes on his last bar................by the time he gets his ass going
With no heat on your punches, its the only way you'll be staying raw kid
Left concepts on your toilet seat, thats why none of these bitches saw shit

meh, good luck.

[Night Mare]

in.

This bitch is 19 I 'Son Herbs' so I Got the 'thumb that’s Green'..
Bitch Im Skeetin all Over' 'Raw Images' Like 'Porno Magazines'!!
call it an itch bitch ur Points are all bent like fucked up Swords..
Ill have u sweatin more than R.kelly at the Teen Choice' awards!!
marked x u squinting like u starring at specs bitch I break necks..
kids a Dumbass cuz A Lyricist's write Songs in Yet he Does Text!!
im Callin Next put u in ur place ur a mistake so ur getting erased..
Bitch u wouldn’t have ''room to improve''.. if he had a ''Myspace''!!

Da Mafia's Dead, yes its fucking dead!!!

showstyle damafias dead u said it ur self but u still rep it in ur profile!!

out.

[Keyser]

Guess this is 1st bump then.......

[Night Mare]

Up's

[Shawn Mac]

Nite we see no evil and hear no evil, weak name and it aint required
Your verse is laughable, with more amusment seen from richard pryor
..Not bad, I can see the point you were tryin to get across. but the wording was really bad. 6/10
Your not worth a forum, the skills to beat me?..............bitch please
Drop your played lines, refresh..... and use em in the jr lyricist league
This line was pretty good. but once again, the wording could have been better. 7.5/10
Alike to the bombings in london its a shock when you see this kid rap
When you got recruited to pandoras box, shit must of been a misshap
What can I say... Wording Could have helped this so much.. not bad tho... 7/10
I've seen more stuff on a maxipad the way this bitch ever gets flowing
This dudes on his last bar................by the time he gets his ass going
:laughmyfuckingassoff: This is one of the funniest bars I've read in a while.9.5/10
With no heat on your punches, its the only way you'll be staying raw kid
Left concepts on your toilet seat, thats why none of these bitches saw shit
Wording... wording wording wording. 6.5/10

36.5/50


This bitch is 19 I 'Son Herbs' so I Got the 'thumb that’s Green'..
Bitch Im Skeetin all Over' 'Raw Images' Like 'Porno Magazines'!!
wording was good. but the concept was played..... 6/10

call it an itch bitch ur Points are all bent like fucked up Swords..
Ill have u sweatin more than R.kelly at the Teen Choice' awards!!
This was good! made me laugh 8/10
marked x u squinting like u starring at specs bitch I break necks..
kids a Dumbass cuz A Lyricist's write Songs in Yet he Does Text!!
!! This was a sick line! Flow was on key and everything! 9/10
im Callin Next put u in ur place ur a mistake so ur getting erased..
Bitch u wouldn’t have ''room to improve''.. if he had a ''Myspace''!!
...This line wasnt very good.. Room to improve just doesnt really work..5/10
Quote:
Originally Posted by 1 Lyricist
Da Mafia's Dead, yes its fucking dead!!!

showstyle damafias dead u said it ur self but u still rep it in ur profile!!
This line was so..so.... I Cant even describe the level of suck.. sorry. 3/10

31/50

[b]Nightmare, your verse honestly looked like it was gonna win.. when I just looked at it. Now that I broke it down to be fair, The last two lines were just to wack to hold up th rest of the verse. Lyricist, you didnt come as hard on alot of your punches, but you hekd a consistent flow of punches at a normal level, and a few in between that were a lot harder. which helped you to win this battle. good battle you guys. peace.

[Yung Phresh]

ehhhh.....bullshit vote......good battle you two....

[Night Mare]

wow what a dumbass can we get some real votes

Up Dose

[Keyser]

Whats the problem with all of you, because you've been here for a while u seem to think just because u get a vote against you, its bullshit? If I lose I lose and vice versa, cant ya'll just deal with it, instead of you artifact freeposting "bullshit vote" its got nothing to do with you, you wasnt even involved in this crew battle, just drop it. 2nd up i guess.

[Nas's_Youngest]

1 lyricist, you got this because, ur flow throughout was more consistent, structure was good for both, your punches and personals hit harder, the rkelly line for Nightmare woulda been alot betta If i hadnt heard it ova a thousand times, its a played line to me now, and your verse was too short, 1 lyricist you also need to work on your wordplay more but this battle was aiight

vote=1 lyricist
come vote on mine please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=216077

[Night Mare]

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up 3

[Pusha C]

man this how i am gone explain both these guys are good and earned respect from me this now i'm gone break it down
Punches: Night Mare
Creativity:lyricist
Opener:'Night mare
Ending:lyricist
Structure:nightmate
vote nightmare

Vote Dqed...Wack..

-Fue