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Thread: How Can I Smile.. (the whole song) updated

  1. July 29th, 2005, 11:41 AM #16
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  2. July 30th, 2005, 10:17 AM #17
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  3. July 30th, 2005, 10:31 AM #18
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    Yo this piece was crazy. Everything was on point and perfect. Da imagery was excellent, your flow was great, n ur multis and wordplay was crazy. I enjoyed readin diz a lot so keep droppin em and keep up da good work. 1
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  4. July 30th, 2005, 11:00 AM #19
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  5. July 31st, 2005, 06:35 PM #20
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    Good concept, chorus was solid. The rhyming was a strength, you used internals and multi-syllable rhyming to keep the long lines flowing. Structure was fine, the second verse had a different feel meter-wise. The emotion was good, and you worked in wordplay as well.
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  6. August 1st, 2005, 08:47 AM #21
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    good looking out yo.. i actualy wrote the 2nd verse bout a week b4 da 1st...


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  7. August 1st, 2005, 09:05 AM #22
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    yo ive read this whole piece three times now i guess and it was hotter the last time i read it which was a few seconds ago.. but as allways nice wordplay, beautiful wordplay, and nice imagry just keep the suspense thing comeing and that will win people everytime...
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  8. August 2nd, 2005, 12:09 PM #23
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    thanx yo i preciate it

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  9. August 2nd, 2005, 12:39 PM #24
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    thanx yo i preciate it

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  10. August 2nd, 2005, 12:43 PM #25
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  11. August 3rd, 2005, 10:58 AM #26
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  12. August 6th, 2005, 09:24 AM #27
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  13. August 18th, 2005, 11:32 AM #28
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  14. August 18th, 2005, 11:58 AM #29
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    pretty dope piece man..had good imagrey multi's were off the hook..structure and order off events were overall pretty spot on and all in all pretty nice work keep droppin hop to see more from you ight...

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  15. August 19th, 2005, 11:16 AM #30
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