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  1. July 20th, 2005, 07:12 PM #1
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    Perception-Undisputed feat. Incineratedrose

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    Bleek silence, no light like the sun was torn apart
    Roughly explaining something crazy, there is no dark
    Neverending people, so i guess that you could kill more
    without seeing a brothers face what have you got to kill for
    Vibrations from heaven, hearing the laughter and playing
    Witnessing the sounds from hell, the punishment for slaying
    No money or health differences, no Race and dignity reflections
    cause even in the awe of nothing, people make exceptions
    Fully knowing the unknown, experiencing forgetting that
    The Pressure from the hatred could make a building flat
    But they survive, punishment for a life wrongly served
    Theft, wrong intentions...or maybe god was just perterbed
    Wrong directions lead hear, The end of all existence
    A place where no law is needed, without light who sees the written?
    Nothing horrible done to end up here, mediokre things
    cheating on your spouse, Nothing much more offensing
    So why the turmoil? simply for a plot in a story
    Cause without heaven or hell, theres always purgatory...
    Gunshots ring out on the block I think about,
    My life, took the bullet in full its missing… all but doubt,
    The rain pours and washes my sins away, along with sorrow,
    To take the burdens off my soul, it will have to rain forever beginning tomorrow,
    I've seen too many caskets filled with dead bodies and shit,
    I'm trying to give my people an excuse to move, that is legitimate,
    We were raised here, we cant leave now, cast a spell,
    Screw living my life for heaven, I've spent my time in hell,
    Tired of the same old shit, its scary and hey a sentiment,
    How the shit am I portraying hell, when I'm fucking living it…

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...79#post2790479

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=212813
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  2. July 20th, 2005, 07:15 PM #2
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  3. July 20th, 2005, 07:31 PM #3
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    Bleek silence, no light like the sun was torn apart
    Roughly explaining something crazy, there is no dark
    Neverending people, so i guess that you could kill more
    without seeing a brothers face what have you got to kill for
    Vibrations from heaven, hearing the laughter and playing
    Witnessing the sounds from hell, the punishment for slaying
    No money or health differences, no Race and dignity reflections
    cause even in the awe of nothing, people make exceptions
    Fully knowing the unknown, experiencing forgetting that
    The Pressure from the hatred could make a building flat
    But they survive, punishment for a life wrongly served
    Theft, wrong intentions...or maybe god was just perterbed
    Wrong directions lead hear, The end of all existence
    A place where no law is needed, without light who sees the written?
    Nothing horrible done to end up here, mediokre things
    cheating on your spouse, Nothing much more offensing
    So why the turmoil? simply for a plot in a story
    Cause without heaven or hell, theres always purgatory...


    decent seen better from u but i love how u put so much detail in it holla back
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  4. July 20th, 2005, 07:31 PM #4
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    Gunshots ring out on the block I think about,
    My life, took the bullet in full its missing… all but doubt,
    The rain pours and washes my sins away, along with sorrow,
    To take the burdens off my soul, it will have to rain forever beginning tomorrow,
    I've seen too many caskets filled with dead bodies and shit,
    I'm trying to give my people an excuse to move, that is legitimate,
    We were raised here, we cant leave now, cast a spell,
    Screw living my life for heaven, I've spent my time in hell,
    Tired of the same old shit, its scary and hey a sentiment,
    How the shit am I portraying hell, when I'm fucking living it…


    i like this one a lil better it all coneected to it n shit good job on both parts u guys are really dedicated to ur work hola back
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  5. July 20th, 2005, 07:42 PM #5
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    At first i just thought you gave feed on his, i was like, how rude ..

    but thanks!
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  6. July 20th, 2005, 08:28 PM #6
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    these peice was very decent it portray alotta imagry and had a good sense of vocabulary in it the syllable count was kinda off in places but still its was only
    really noticable by vision cuz when i tried to jus say it while i was read'n it..it sounded
    good anyway so it wasn't a big deal this was overall a very good peice keep up the good work Undisputed and Incineratedrose im impressed
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    Walking on water like when Christ did, glidin
    Mic in my plam like the trident in the hand of Poseidon
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  7. July 20th, 2005, 08:44 PM #7
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    yay!

    thanks yuhz.
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  8. July 20th, 2005, 09:36 PM #8
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    It was Nice i liked the detail a lot gaveam ea good image of what was going on


    A place where no law is needed, without light who sees the written?
    Nothing horrible done to end up here, mediokre things
    cheating on your spouse, Nothing much more offensing
    So why the turmoil? simply for a plot in a story
    Cause without heaven or hell, theres always purgatory...
    Gunshots ring out on the block I think about,
    My life, took the bullet in full its missing… all but doubt,

    i liked the transition from person to person

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  9. July 20th, 2005, 09:46 PM #9
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    *feels dope*

    thnx for the feedback guyz....
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  10. July 21st, 2005, 02:03 AM #10
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    yo dope drop...both of yall

    i aint impresses with incineratedrose's verse...kuz im used to seeing him drop dope all the fucking time...lol..good shit yall...first time ive seen undisputed's work but damn homie im impressed...this aas an overall drop had dope imagery...the flow was nice...the whole detailed drop was perfect...yall this shit was one of the best drops ive seen in awhile...yall made it worth reading....

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  11. July 21st, 2005, 06:13 AM #11
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    You need to edit some better feedback into the first link. Do it, or this gets closed. Thanks.
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  12. July 21st, 2005, 11:54 AM #12
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    Done with better feedback....
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  13. July 21st, 2005, 12:05 PM #13
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    nice stuff man but it seemed like u both were talking about a different thing on a collab u tlak about the same..like undis. was talking about a bucnh of stuff while rose talked about gun violence and dead bodies so yeah work on that..in other words u had nice flow, structure, and pretty good vocab. great piece I say 7.5/10 cuz the mishap but great job..leave feedback on mine
    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=212049
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  14. July 21st, 2005, 12:10 PM #14
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    Dude, you're stupid, its called perception for a reason... like my guy isnt really sure he believes in heaven or hell, because hes a realist and he thinks he is living hell...

    PERCEPTION, we can PERCEIVE things differently.
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  15. July 21st, 2005, 01:35 PM #15
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    ahh yes, and up.
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