how am I dissin myself..you retarted fam..uppin....
how am I dissin myself..you retarted fam..uppin....
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lmao w/e dude jsut make sure there isnt no more d/rs aight(and if they aint then I dont care) ~4~
man ur verses suck dude, really voters dont have to choose
cuz man ur a coward.....s'why ur verses are only heard as moos
u got the blues, uranium, flows through my brain, so dude im winnin it
and I would snap ur cranium,but I dont wanna be to technical for ya,idiot
get it yet?dude the audience dont like to hear ya rap, mini whore
they all break doors down for u..so they cant hear ya crap anymore
many adore me but u? nah man, u make the ppl go past insane
so now I break ya head open..then begin trying to find ya brain
ya old grab ya cane, pout right, I know ur sad cuz ur poor, and im rich
but I would challenge ya outside..just I wouldnt want ya hip to break bitch
ur a snitch, weed rolls on my floor, and im horny, wutta a major sin
I would peep through holes..but that means I gotta read ur shit again
this was a pretty straight verse, pretty good strucutre not perfect but not bad, flow was on point and that mostly your strong point here, punches werent as great as i thought theyd be but nothing a little re-wording couldnt do, keep it up.
Vs.
In this battle you'll lose kid, didn't want to tell you whack, but dats wat da truth is
we'll c hoo lives, but he idolizes me, cuz wen ever my name gets glory I gotta include his!
you lack punches, but me? I own fights, Tech is here to make a mockery of known rights
I'm battlin this thrown dyke, how you expect to beat 'elevated peeps' wen u cant beat 'low-lifes'?!
youll get hit with jabs, this biter's in 'search of equipment' like peeps lookin 4 'distant labs'
rip ur calves, he cant even spell hours correctly in ur rules, I know u failed english class!
I'm killin this fagget, don't even bother to post kid, u gettin beat in impressive fashion
this beatin is drastic, cuz u let DVS get the best of u like peeps that like digital gadgets!!
when he see the votes, I'll leave dude fussin, so strong, you'll get ur tooth punched in
you bout to get murked cousin, I see u got abused, but did u really have to go public? *
you had pretty strected lines which dont help, the flow was iffy so nothing that great there, structure sucked, punches werent to bad again they ould have landed harder if you did a lil re-wording. good job.
Overall: Rile took this cause he had harder attempts n shit..
V/ - R.
man ur verses suck dude, really voters dont have to choose
cuz man ur a coward.....s'why ur verses are only heard as moos
u got the blues, uranium, flows through my brain, so dude im winnin it
and I would snap ur cranium,but I dont wanna be to technical for ya,idiot
get it yet?dude the audience dont like to hear ya rap, mini whore
they all break doors down for u..so they cant hear ya crap anymore
many adore me but u? nah man, u make the ppl go past insane
so now I break ya head open..then begin trying to find ya brain
ya old grab ya cane, pout right, I know ur sad cuz ur poor, and im rich
but I would challenge ya outside..just I wouldnt want ya hip to break bitch
ur a snitch, weed rolls on my floor, and im horny, wutta a major sin
I would peep through holes..but that means I gotta read ur shit again
this verse had nice flow and was creative in a way that made me laugh...well done but try to make your punches more complicated homie
In this battle you'll lose kid, didn't want to tell you whack, but dats wat da truth is
we'll c hoo lives, but he idolizes me, cuz wen ever my name gets glory I gotta include his!
you lack punches, but me? I own fights, Tech is here to make a mockery of known rights
I'm battlin this thrown dyke, how you expect to beat 'elevated peeps' wen u cant beat 'low-lifes'?!
youll get hit with jabs, this biter's in 'search of equipment' like peeps lookin 4 'distant labs'
rip ur calves, he cant even spell hours correctly in ur rules, I know u failed english class!
I'm killin this fagget, don't even bother to post kid, u gettin beat in impressive fashion
this beatin is drastic, cuz u let DVS get the best of u like peeps that like digital gadgets!!
when he see the votes, I'll leave dude fussin, so strong, you'll get ur tooth punched in
you bout to get murked cousin, I see u got abused, but did u really have to go public? *
your lines were streched which ruined the verse for me along with the bad structure...but the content had potential so carry on doin what ya din but just elevate on structure and make ya lines even okay
v//rile
ok ppl u need to f****ng vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
teknical got a nice style about himself, so I'm a have to give this battle to him. Rile, not bad at all...not bad at all, but overall teknical came out on top. Both should practice elevation, Rile1 too much self glory, it's hard ain't it?
i gotta give this win to rile man cuz he had stronger punchlines and shit...tech u had sum hot lines there too but u didnt come as strong. but u both had good structures and flows so dont worry about elevating on that....but for stronger punches and personals......v//rile
Tight battle ima hit this shit up when i reach 100 post
Rile-good punches and flow fealt most of ur stuff u fell off in some parts but overall a good job....
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nothing(srry i waz lookin for something)
v/rile
The battle was decent, Ive seen rile do betta but u battlin a noweight dat dont rhyme like one so i gotta give him respect for dat even tho he prolly aint even a noweight
rile ur verse was decent the punches was aiight wit a good structure and easy flow to read, Tech had the best punch in this bout his structure was decent and flow was good so i had to give it to him by a small margin
Vote-Technical
DOnt sleep on me, Help me close dis
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=215390
Good battle...Kinda close....But rile1 win dis....You both had good punches but rile came harder...Tech just keep goin harder at punches....
Return da favor...Vote honestly....
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=215430
Hmm.
This battle wasnt that great, but it wasnt that bad..
rile1 took this cause his punches came a little harder, and he attempted more...other dude you were mostly statements n shit, that shit wont work yo.
v/r.
decesent really vote breakdown
Rile verse : 7.9/10
Technical: 6,8/10
Flow-rile
punches-tie
personals-rile
wordplay-rile
structure-rile
overall-rile
rile had some decsent punches and flow my v/rile
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