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Twin
maxilion
10-12 lines
No D/R
No hate
due in 15 min.
this is my check
checking in.....................................
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VOTE ON MY BATTLES....& I WILL VOTE ON YOURS......
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You’re ‘micro soft’ (Microsoft) yet you never seem to ‘Excel’-n-ya-verse
Couldn’t curse me with a spell-n-ya-verse, you’re being ‘schooled’ so ‘expel’-n-disperse
You’re lines are ‘Trippin’ like M-T-V and more ‘played’ than an M-P-3
He’s ‘sexin’ my verses.. that’s why his condemned (condom) raps (wraps) are empty-see?
And speakin of, if MTV had “Battle of the Sexualities” you’d be on the homocide (homo side)
He can’t ‘chase me’ cuz he’s slow-so-hide, he came to my show with “All Access” : Denied
Watch your bitch. If you dont well be touching and groping then
Your girl legs are like broken locks..theres no real key to open them
Twin aka Mr. Ordinary-lacks-perfection, that’s why you leave me bored-ya-very-whack.. -objection? (no)
He tried getting ‘pissy’.. and had a urinary-tract-infection
Maximilion is still in ELEMENTARY..You'd Be Better Off Not Even MENTIONIN-ME..
Cus Ill Leave Mo 'Holes-In-Ya-Ass'....Than If You'd Spent A Decade In a PENITENTIARY...
Batman and superman?ya sig is lame..Ya rap carrer couldnt fill even one page of comic book frames...
Well then in this case...im a bat with kryptonite flowing through my veins..
I heard ya IQ was a little low..still mad cause the special ED at your school play...even stoled ya role...
I was just told..that your only 12 yeares old...so was hitting puberty this years goal?....
This is a race..your the TURTLE..but you say you got the game on lock....
So you a VET....if you survive ima still leave ya with SHELLSHOCK...
I'lll numb ya mouth with large servings of novacaine..take a few doses..
People tell you to close you mouth cause you cant rap...not cause you have hallatosious(bad breath)....
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VOTE ON MY BATTLES....& I WILL VOTE ON YOURS......
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uppp
uppin 2
I Cant vote cuz i dont have nuff posts
but all i can say is..both ya work on ya structures
cuz that was horrible
that made u not even want 2 read no more
cuz it was hard 2 follow
jus keep workin on it
Written Voices
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ThE DiENa$TY
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i like max cuz he had a way better verse and he had some more multies that catched my eyes v/maximillion
open battles
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hahahaha dawg max, u str8 kilt em' dawg
lets see...Twin:
Maximilion is still in ELEMENTARY..You'd Be Better Off Not Even MENTIONIN-ME..
Cus Ill Leave Mo 'Holes-In-Ya-Ass'....Than If You'd Spent A Decade In a PENITENTIARY...
ok opener
Batman and superman?ya sig is lame..Ya rap carrer couldnt fill even one page of comic book frames...
Well then in this case...im a bat with kryptonite flowing through my veins..
nah
I heard ya IQ was a little low..still mad cause the special ED at your school play...even stoled ya role...
I was just told..that your only 12 yeares old...so was hitting puberty this years goal?....
hell nah
This is a race..your the TURTLE..but you say you got the game on lock....
So you a VET....if you survive ima still leave ya with SHELLSHOCK...
sux
I'lll numb ya mouth with large servings of novacaine..take a few doses..
People tell you to close you mouth cause you cant rap...not cause you have hallatosious(bad breath)....
aiight closer 6/10
Nigga u had a good opener an a decent closer, but everything between it was trash yo
you need t' elevate foreal man, but keep at it we all gotta start somewherez
Max:
You’re ‘micro soft’ (Microsoft) yet you never seem to ‘Excel’-n-ya-verse
Couldn’t curse me with a spell-n-ya-verse, you’re being ‘schooled’ so ‘expel’-n-disperse nice wordplay yo, good opener
You’re lines are ‘Trippin’ like M-T-V and more ‘played’ than an M-P-3
He’s ‘sexin’ my verses.. that’s why his condemned (condom) raps (wraps) are empty-see?again I like ya wordplay...decent
And speakin of, if MTV had “Battle of the Sexualities” you’d be on the homocide (homo side)
He can’t ‘chase me’ cuz he’s slow-so-hide, he came to my show with “All Access” : Denied haha str8 merkin
Watch your bitch. If you dont well be touching and groping then
Your girl legs are like broken locks..theres no real key to open them
ok
Twin aka Mr. Ordinary-lacks-perfection, that’s why you leave me bored-ya-very-whack.. -objection? (no)
He tried getting ‘pissy’.. and had a urinary-tract-infection
ehh...coulda been betta 9/10
Max def won dis shit jus by wordplay man...I like da multis yo, ya flow was str8 as fuck
Twin try usin more complex mutis when ya use em' B
v/max
Open battles:
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maxilion:i like your punches they were good and so creative not too maany people on here can be creative but that all good well put verse and hard punches overall 8.5/10
twin:your verse was ok i liked it from you cause your just starting out on here so big ups but come wit a lil betta punches and good things in the future cause nit that many like you overall i give you a 7.5/10
V/maxilion
i actually looked at this before, but i didnt leave any feed....so here ya go..
maxilion-
You’re ‘micro soft’ (Microsoft) yet you never seem to ‘Excel’-n-ya-verse
Couldn’t curse me with a spell-n-ya-verse, you’re being ‘schooled’ so ‘expel’-n-disperse
....not a bad opener....
You’re lines are ‘Trippin’ like M-T-V and more ‘played’ than an M-P-3
He’s ‘sexin’ my verses.. that’s why his condemned (condom) raps (wraps) are empty-see?
....nice punch, witty....
And speakin of, if MTV had “Battle of the Sexualities” you’d be on the homocide (homo side)
He can’t ‘chase me’ cuz he’s slow-so-hide, he came to my show with “All Access” : Denied
....pretty good punch....
Watch your bitch. If you dont well be touching and groping then
Your girl legs are like broken locks..theres no real key to open them
.....decent punch.......
Twin aka Mr. Ordinary-lacks-perfection, that’s why you leave me bored-ya-very-whack.. -objection? (no)
He tried getting ‘pissy’.. and had a urinary-tract-infection
....good closer....
overall-8/10
alright this was a nice verse overall. you've gotten alot better since we battled. you had more witty shit and punches. you came more direct with better wordplay.
Twin-
Maximilion is still in ELEMENTARY..You'd Be Better Off Not Even MENTIONIN-ME..
Cus Ill Leave Mo 'Holes-In-Ya-Ass'....Than If You'd Spent A Decade In a PENITENTIARY...
.....pretty good opener....
Batman and superman?ya sig is lame..Ya rap carrer couldnt fill even one page of comic book frames...
Well then in this case...im a bat with kryptonite flowing through my veins..
....no, not a good punch.......
I heard ya IQ was a little low..still mad cause the special ED at your school play...even stoled ya role...
I was just told..that your only 12 yeares old...so was hitting puberty this years goal?....
.....eh kinda played....but alright i guess....
This is a race..your the TURTLE..but you say you got the game on lock....
So you a VET....if you survive ima still leave ya with SHELLSHOCK...
....eh no.....dont really like it.....
I'lll numb ya mouth with large servings of novacaine..take a few doses..
People tell you to close you mouth cause you cant rap...not cause you have hallatosious(bad breath)....
....ok closer........
overall-6/10
alright, this was a decent verse at best...you need to come harder with better wordplay and harsher punches with more direct shit. just keep elevatin...
v/maxilion
U Both Came Decent But I Think Max Was More Creative And Had Stronger Punches.
V/max
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