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    a taste

    im like roy jones jr. i can't be stopped
    like doc dre i talk the talk and walk the walk
    and yes my bite is stronger than my bark
    ima hit you like you just got in a crash with a car
    like game i ran for my 300 bars
    but i didnt have the concious to stall
    and stutter to a stop
    i kept rippin people till they're jaws dropped
    but i didnt stop there i took it to the next level
    you might as well paint me red gimme horns and call me raps devil
    homie i'll take you to hell and back wiht my words
    beat you down on the sidewalk smash your head on the curb
    for me this isnt a choice its the only career path
    i got to hustle got to flow or i wont come back
    im bout to give you the best of both worlds hip hop and rap
    i'll spit it so sick you might even think i'm black
    but there is an advantage to bein white
    it means that everythihg a black writes
    i can spit iit not as good and still look like
    the best white emcee ever to write
    but thats not really how i operate
    if you wanna try me i'll take you cradle to the grave
    and when i tell you i'll be great
    i no i've got a long ways to go but not because of my age
    beacuse of these wires i've got on my mouth like kanye west
    but mine arent from a car crash mine are racial sayin i shouldn't get
    the recgonition i clearly deserve
    is criticism for bein white all im worth
    like eminem im a sing for the moment
    bring to cultures together out in the open
    not thru a speech or a concert
    but the every word and each verse
    even i doubt i'll ever make it big time
    people screamin every word to every rhyme
    but what if i did what if i dreamed
    im up on stage listenin to MY fans scream
    you'll remember you go the first taste
    of the next white boy to run the race
    im OUT

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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

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    it seemed like none of your lines went together... it was AIGHTT... but i dont like it that much try harder next time wit yo vocabulary ok

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    vocab, multies, punches, all types of literary devices you can use to make ya verse better but it was an OK drop nothing extremely special but work on it and youll be aiight but i liked the piece it just wasnt a phenomenal piece of lyricism.... it woul be better if it wasnt so basic, but just keep writing man, youll get there....
    Harlem all day holla at me!!!!! the home of the illest... Murda Mook, Jae Millz, Big L, and... me


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    The ultimate guide to hustlin LOL!! get it in ya life niggas the fuck you know bout it??? HARLEM !!!

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    appreciate teh feed bak peaches and franchise
    peace

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    It Was Straight But Got Confusin At Times

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