Punches- Tim
Personals- Tim
Flow- tie
Creativity- tie
Complexity- Tim
I just think Tim's verse was more original, he used played concepts, and made them creative and such. His verse was filled with personals and complexity, it was just an elite verse. Konfuzion, Ur verse was nice, but it lacked alot of important things, such as U could of worded alot of them punches better, to make them hit harder. And U could of made them alot more harsh. Nice battle, but Tim took it.
Vote - Tim
Konfusion
always about a big-picture but still noone can connect-the-dots...
Thinkin I would come weak but you should just respect-the-drops
Not really a punch...
ironic when your hottest-drop in sumone elses-post...
you gunna battle me as tim or you gunna ENTER-under-some-dude,
kid its like sexual envy its time a MEMBER-overun-you..
Should have came with punches like this the entire drop
Not bad though but just not strong enough
Tim
knock knock.....whos there??? in this battle you'll be smoked
^^^^^^throwin this opener proves I just see you as a joke
Good opener and creativity
your unseen to me on the charts like a pair of shut eye lids
With Personals that are as useless as sunglasses to blind kids
Konfuzion your a waste of verse, and with animosty god damn
And whats worse your just a pain in my Balls like a prostate exam
Decent punches and stabs
Vote/Tim.....for coming with more punches and creativity
Konfuzion did have a couple decent lines...
but i think tim took this
v/ tim
Methods
Kon came wit creativity but tim took it wit punches
v/tim
Kon---So so...couple ok lines...5/10
Tim--- Nice....all good shit....8/10
v/Tim...better verse
v/ tim
only because he had some humour . worded like fuck but still funny concepts .
aka Illtalic.
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Konfuzion. I didnt really like anything you came up with in your verse. Nothing stood out to me. I think what you need to do is try and come up with better concepts cuz thats the root of where you were lacking. Weak concepts lead to weak punchlines..
Tim. your verse was good. Some things were played...like i remember seeing some of your concepts way back when i first signed on to this site. But the opener came off nice, and the rest was just eh. You did what you needed to do to win. g/j
Vote Tim.
Stat
nothing
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Common Kon please you should retire, your verses are trash
Ill have you looking for lighters the way your lossing this match
nothing else especially special. kon focused to much on rhymes and not enough on making nice punches. the vote goes accordingly.
vote - Tim
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The glass isn't half empty, it's one third full...
but I wouldn't drink that anyway, it's mostly backwash.
wow tim won this due to having more better lines than kon, i only liked his members line
vote tim
I believe i'm making some good music, please just wait for me
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I give it to Tim on this one, dat cripple line was a trip
...::Still Untamed/Uncaged/Unbeaten::...
Konfuzion.
You think yur methods on battlin beyond me and you support this?
No man because your style like astronomical proportions,
I'm not feeling this punch. It's just a basic diss.
always about a big-picture but still noone can connect-the-dots...
Thinkin I would come weak but you should just respect-the-drops
This is just a statement, not a punch.
like smoke in the night you wont even realize-ya-choked,
Tim changes his inner-colors more than a kaleidoscope.
This was an all right punch. Try & make your set up go w/ the punch.
put your whackness in moderation and melt-this-host,
ironic when your hottest-drop in sumone elses-post...
This is a played out concept, and a basic diss.
you gunna battle me as tim or you gunna ENTER-under-some-dude,
kid its like sexual envy its time a MEMBER-overun-you..
Sexual lines need creativity to be effective since all are basically played out.
you know i make you fulla hatred but ya droppin-stay-dull,
coz ya HAT-RED pours mores than when im done stompin-ya-skull
This was forced playboy.
this kid bananas in the court and yes i mind-ya-a-peel,
when you outta FLOW with one CHECK left on a poker tables
....................... the only time you ever gunna sign-for-a-deal..
Stretched, but it was all right.
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Timothaos.
knock knock.....whos there??? in this battle you'll be smoked
^^^^^^throwin this opener proves I just see you as a joke
An all right personal.
Common Kon please you should retire, your verses are trash
Ill have you looking for lighters the way your lossing this match
An all right line.
You Remix Open Mics with eminem can you get anymore lame
A Distributer Of Agent Orange thats whats fucked with your brain
Not feeling this, just a statement playboy.
Why even show man you knew who the fuck you were facin
like fans in wheel chairs your verse gets no standing ovation
This was a force.
Dudes 22-6 with 1,393 posts wow........... and isnt it bizarre
that with all that shit i still dont care who the fuck you are
This is played out.
your unseen to me on the charts like a pair of shut eye lids
With Personals that are as useless as sunglasses to blind kids
This line is also played out.
Konfuzion your a waste of verse, and with animosty god damn
And whats worse your just a pain in my Balls like a prostate exam
Ha, all right kid.
Overall.
Konfusion, you throw punches most of the time and sometimes get sidetracked with statements. You are halfway all right man. Just throw some more creativitiy into your stuff next week playboy. Tim, you throw punches. Expand your style and not just use similies/metaphors. Throw in wordplay / creativity into it pimpin'. This match was close, but I saw Tim winning this. He had the better lines overall and more wit to them.
Vote.
Timothaos.
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