Ill Rhymez

[Madik]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...08#post2646608

I'm equipped and heavily armed with steady but strong constanty
of grenades, guns, and blades to get more demomic than contantine
but i hold the weight of the planet, stroll and invade into madik
and get rolled and shaved in hash then smoked and baked into ashes
cause there's no way you can past this, with a creative and massive flow
so much chill, satan can't bash my skull, attack with a classic blow
listen to this bastard flow, faster and faster goes, mastered rolls
of hits followed by rows or shattered skulls, and battered folks
so hand the microphone and watch me get technically ill
either get wrecked or get killed, i'm an mc with respect handed and skill
cause i get hasty and a bit willing to intentionaly cut your jugular vain
i gather pain and hand it out as soon as my rhymes smother brains

[Malik_G]

nice flow

[Madik]

thanks dawg, you still wanna battle

[E Tha Real]

no offense but when you read this it feels as
if you wanted a badge of compliments for being
able to use multi's in a brag/ self glorification form.
if you set your standards that low then all you get
is replies like "dope flow"...don't force anything and
work on content because you can rap its the message
that over-shadows the rhyme scheme a large percent
of the time.

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[Madik]

thanks for the advice

[Pyro_Unleased]

ill battle you in a rap battle freesytle , or what ever you want alright?

[Dan Dare]

Sixteen lines minimum. Closed.