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    Nice Guy

    Nice Guy

    I am the nice guy…
    The nice guy gives the girl attention,
    The nice guy shows the girl affection.
    I stand by to show her that I’m there,
    I persist although she doesn’t really care.
    I’m the one she eventually falls for,
    The one that she soon came to adore.
    But am I, the one who’s finished last?
    Or is it the other guys she’s had in the past?
    They got what they wanted, got it before me…
    I was the good guy, but she wouldn’t let us be.
    She turns to me after she’s been used,
    I hate to think of how she’s been abused…
    I have the girl now but she wasn’t mine at first…
    They tasted her touch while I was left to thirst.
    I am the nice guy…
    Gone. Like Dust.

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    lyricalgangsta.
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    hmmmmmmmmmmm the topic was unusual and it just seemed like you were a mommas boy whith a whole lot of self glory and shit.... you gave some good points but some lines were wack ..... try not to say that u finish last( my most hated line )
    "The nice guy gives the girl attention,
    The nice guy shows the girl affection." this was my favorite line all together 7/10

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    [b]yo That Poem Waz Off Tha Chain Son Keep Writin' There Waznt 1 Part Of It I Aint Like.........1

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