The Meaning of Our Love

[B.A.D.]

i wrote this to my girlfriend, tried something different with it, tell me what you think

its something i cant explain, only pertain and express

lurking around each n every emotion and caress
our loves the best, each feeling tosses and turns
valentines for life--thru shit we've both lost and learned
everyday's concerns burn by night thru spoken word

yesterday's news of us have passed by whats occured
only you and i defying dedication this way
understand patience--allowing anxiety to rid away

krazy thoughts obtain our conscience, and we're wantin it bad
and our actions reflect upon us, from what we won't have to what we had
till death do we part, but untill then it's our start
havin every chance we take to be carved in our hearts
every moment we make last, through good and bad in the past
explains our love for eachother, sharing our lasting laughs

[Lurid]

ur one cheeeezyyyyyyyyyyyyy motha fucka to write a fuckin poem for ur bitch and its an acrostic. ANyway it wasnt that bad u could use better vocab and there wasnt a good structa or nothing but........................... u will probably geta lot of pussy for writing shit like that
4/10 u seem like a little sensitive girl and u probably wrote this so she wont break up with you

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If you don't like it that's fine, but instead of hating try leaving
some constructive criticism. Consider yourself warned.

-Mantra