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    Exclamation i wish i could get rid ( my frist poem)

    yo i sit back and think/
    that why am i in a close place/
    talkin to a riddler/
    ask ?'s like he was the devil/
    i came for help/
    but instead he tries to confuse/
    blames those who i love /
    for the things that i did/
    i wish i could get rid/
    get rid of all the things that i did/
    beacase as a kid/
    i lied about every liltle thing that i did/
    i wish i could get rid/

    me get better and deeper

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    Wow this is really good for a first poem. keep going, try to write from the heart! Expand your vocabulary also. Keep dropping poetry! Lookin forward to readin more from you! Check out some of my poems if you want to!
    ::..Malaika..::

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