8-12 Lines
Due in 40 Minutes after check in
you spit first
G'Luck
daddy kwick
Journal!st
8-12 Lines
Due in 40 Minutes after check in
you spit first
G'Luck
checkin in................................................ ................
sittin on lightsabers is ur way of gettin rug burn/
tossed up and diced in my whack emcee death churn/
fuck a damn "darth" what the fuck son thats gay, u been told/
star wars is for teenagers wit no life....guess u fit the mold/
make this fagget commit lyrical suicide cuz he's gonna do it all alone/
stranglin ya self wit ya on flows in ya bathtub holdin a cordless phone/
sendin me PM's wit teh smilieman son get a life/
better yet hide the face of ur manly lookin wife/
rapin hogs when they go to eat is ur best way to get ~porked~/
ya flows are slippin away in this cuz it's like eatin soup wit a fork/
ending this kwick cuz daddy is fed up wit ur constant shit/
no remorse for your own battle takin words for granite,bitch/
lol im done fool
Daddy Kwick? You could have the flu..and still not spit sick..
Cus now everyone in rb can witness Dk get slicced Quick...
Your 18 but you spit like your in kindergarten..kid elevate ..
Cus you and loses go together,Mine as well call you soul-mates..
Your as pitifull , as me reading your occupation..Must be a low life..
Cus you always scratching ya nuts..Mine as well call your hand your wife..
Can you make up your mind are you a amatuer boxer? or a wannabe Textee..
................. seems nothing is working out for you , cus know your on rb ...
Wtf? do you think your a mortal combat character?Cus here you a noweight..Originally Posted by daddy Kwick
Pm me to drop,why you wanna lose even quicker?I thought id give you time to live..
Cus you aint jesus so you aint reviving,you verse journ, ha you aint gonna survive
Blah upping for votes
i hated it, but i expected journalist to eat it up considering his stats, daddy kwick had the badder spit therefore he wins. I really wanted journalist to win tho cuz of nazi cartman.
I really dont feel I have to break this down so her e we go:
DK-ur verse was to simplistic there was nothing to stand out in ya rhyme man it was ok for a beginner(i think ur a beginner) but it was nothing speacial and ya punch lines aint hit hard enought good try tho
Journ-well ya verse was just better flow was off a bit in spaces but u dug into your opponent more you had better personals and slightly better punches but they lander harder so u got the battle
V/J
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MAN THAT NIGG TRUJGG OR WATEVA IS STUPID KID HE A DUMB FUCK YO J TOO THIS NO DESRESPECT TO DA OPPONENT
YO J
RTF KID
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this battle was wack i expected journalist to come harder and eat this nigga
Journal!st-his punches were iight and the rhymes I was feelin them
DK-His punches were weak and his rymes was basic from my point of view
dk expand your vocabulary
v/Journal!st
yo this rap was week but i dj kwick a lil better vote on some of my battles
i gotta give this to journalist, nice word play good ryhmes, just need a lil bit mo voab and thats it RTF
Bump................Upping for some more votes...will return the favor
Vote - Journal!st
Neither had a dope verse but journs was better. He had harder hitting punches although they werent actually too good. Daddy you need to use better vocab cus yours is very basic and doesnt look good. Also work on your punches and your verse dont flow too well.
Journ
Nice Shit Man Came Decent Straight To The Point, Got Good With Vocabulary Here, Also Had Good Structure Nic Punches Came Creative In This Battle Which Was An Up On The Fact Your Wordplay Was Decent, Your Personals Was Good Had Alot Of Decent Shit in The Verse, I Liked It nice Shit Man
Daddy Kwick
Aiight First Off Don't Put Them "//" Things It Makes Your Structure/ Punches Look Dumb You Came Okay With Punches Played Out Shit Though But Good For Trying Man
Wordplay Came Good Not To Creative But Some Parts Was, Over All Okay Verse Man
Journ Hands Down Man
Still Out For Revenge....
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