15 minz blind spit
check in at same time
no d/r
bring ya best
15 minz blind spit
check in at same time
no d/r
bring ya best
this dude thinking im stevy wonder when i spit rhymes,
already got you shook like a coke head with no dimes/
your coming up short like willie greene at the foul lines,
im the thriller raping this boy, pull down those damn blinds/
cause i will get out of these crimes when i just pay fines,
don't spit that gangster shit, cause i guarantee you never seen nines/
how did i know you were going to come out with a fag joke,
society stares at you cruel and laughs like "what did he smoke?"/
it's only 10 lines and i just didnt think about this bullshit,
better come at me with 2 guns, a knife, and an ice pick/
check check
yo
Is it me or does this man look like " ward" from leave it to beaver //
why battle a warrior when you couldnt merk a old geiser //
why you dont show up on line in months a mystery //
Drop my line right here an ya styll be history //
this mans picture in his avater "in his so called streets" //
when i send him to his casket, he remains the same with out the teeth //
Da Navy will leave ya body all ozzy an mushy //
Send a thankz to ya sister an mom cuz that was some good pussie //
Murdered ya children an left them nailed to a tree //
This Jay so stupid he'd prolly take the blame for the third degree //
He'll enter prison with big bubba all mushy an weak //
Get fucked by em 1 hour 7 days a week //
yeah yo aint no feeding man blind spit Keep it going homie lets go
Is it me or does this man look like " ward" from leave it to beaver //
-that line is from the movie 8 mile by Eminem just in case you did not know.
up no he quotes " Ward' i think you were a little hard on the beaver so was eddie haskel wally an miss clever i dont beleave it is even close to that homie lol.... " Pay more attention to the movie...
your right.
Hey Man I Have To Vote For Rap Warrior For Comming Harder
He Brought More Personals
Also I Liked His Orginality
No Hate Jay Dot
I Thought He Had Better Punches
However You Also Came Harder I Overall Though Both Of You Brought Your Game
No Hate
V/rp For Better Flow And Pucnches
yo man i honestly have to give my vote to rap cause thats what he made this, a rap. the others guy shit was alright but diddnt really diss him hard. rap warriors flow was tight and i lvoed his punches. honestly his shit just hit home harderfor me.
v/rw
votin for Rap
warrior hadalotmorepunces that were way more creative, he hada good flow and good strucutre. wordplay was ight and descent could have been way better. nice creativity with the punches
jay ya came to basic with wordplay and ya punches were realweakman ya not gonna win wit weak punches. ya had a descent flowand structure but ya creativity was weak and very "preskewl"
come harder next time
v/rap warrior
i have to vote for rap warrior
i liked ihs rap
good punches
good style
jay dot if you came a little harder you may have clinched it
i have to vote for rap warrior
i liked ihs rap
good punches
good style
jay dot if you came a little harder you may have clinched it
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