Blind Vs Laced Up

[GOD_FATHER]

yo i cant vote but damn when looked at the battle i liked laced shit for real ut your form is a little messy fix that up for everybody to understand laced

[TokenWhiteGirl]

If I could vote, I'd give it to Laced Up, his hits were harder. Blind, you really need to work on yo originality. Both of you need to work on yo stucture, but it was a good battle...

[Laced Up]

aye uppin someone close dis for me ill holla..................

[Lil Nicky]

Blind you were shit, lol, Laced up wins coz he had a better battle over all, keep it up, u can only get better

[jazzy]

this batle was wack, you call that lirical attack
that not the way ,to grow your paper stack
i think the rimeskill you lack
so you 'd better go and pack
buy some crack
and set it off like a crackerjack

your shit is tacky
maby eaven a little wacky
like runnin down the street
with one nike and one cacky

nah just havin alittle fun
and im not trying to stunn
but stepp off sun
before you get done





by the way i take on any challenge any one i dont care i will eat you alive

[KªL¡]

i have to say Lacedup won this.
though structure and many a lines were forced, still did a pretty good job with creativitym and comn towards your oppponent, even up ya lines, and make your verse less unattractive by stoppn w/ all the quotes and slahes or w/e, work on it alittle, bvut overall, ya got the job done homie. Just make sure ya punches are more effectively spit w/ a purpose.

other dude, not feeln ya verse homie, ya structure was way off plus s;ashes and a bunch of fillers wont win ya battles you gotta get creative with your punchlines and personals. use a beter rhyme scheme that will deliver your meaning of your verse with force.

vote/---laced


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