aight,10 lines due in 20 minutes
no hate votes
no dick riding
no biting
good luck
lady_cre
babytori489
aight,10 lines due in 20 minutes
no hate votes
no dick riding
no biting
good luck
IM FRESHA THAN A MUFUCKA,YEA IM A MUFUCKA
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I eliminate ya throne//not b4 i let acid rain precipitate and decinigrate ya bones//u hot?i put u out just like a fireman//sendin 4 bullets, then 5 again//some say i shoot on more opponents, than that ni99a iverson//and who da fucq called u pac//ni99a u jock all tha lyrics i drop, knowin im da queen of dis hot spot//u dammed right im gifted//also eat mc`s wit a characteristic of cannibalistic//i speak a lot, about tha same way u thinkin of glocs//when i said fagot reedeem urself, not start finger fucqin ya ni99a coc.k....
ayo,u call ya self lady cre
y not"ms i need a feedin please"
ya walk on da block scarin people away
cuz ya look worse den bone crusher on one of his good days
yea,u LITERALLY eat mcs ight ya fat azz bitch
all ya good 4 is suckin dick
still niggas put a bag ova ya face so dey dont get sick
i already knew dat ya lines was gon be weak
ya comin up here ready fa a losin streak
so heres sum advice:dont fuk wit me.
IM FRESHA THAN A MUFUCKA,YEA IM A MUFUCKA
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aight yo,uppin fa votes.honest votin only,honest feedback plz.
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lady_cre:
I eliminate ya throne//not b4 i let acid rain precipitate and decinigrate ya bones//u hot?i put u out just like a fireman//sendin 4 bullets, then 5 again//some say i shoot on more opponents, than that ni99a iverson//and who da fucq called u pac//ni99a u jock all tha lyrics i drop, knowin im da queen of dis hot spot//u dammed right im gifted//also eat mc`s wit a characteristic of cannibalistic//i speak a lot, about tha same way u thinkin of glocs//when i said fagot reedeem urself, not start finger fucqin ya ni99a coc.k....
first of all your verse was badly structured, you need to start a new line after each rhyme (unless you're doing multis). 2nd I know you're knew so I'ma give some advice: don't talk about yourself at all in your verse, unless it is necessary to set up a diss. Concentrate just on dissing your opponent: not his girl or her man or their mum just them. This will win you the most battles. Make them cry, insult them.
babytori:
ayo,u call ya self lady cre
y not"ms i need a feedin please"
^^not rhyming, and the punch could have been worded better (not as a question)
ya walk on da block scarin people away
cuz ya look worse den bone crusher on one of his good days
^^ok but not very imaginative
yea,u LITERALLY eat mcs ight ya fat azz bitch
all ya good 4 is suckin dick
^^this is a very very very old diss, try and be more creative
still niggas put a bag ova ya face so dey dont get sick
i already knew dat ya lines was gon be weak
ya comin up here ready fa a losin streak
so heres sum advice:dont fuk wit me.
^^the last line is a waste of space, and the rest is not very creative, but at least you're attacking
the structure was ok. To you I'd also say, don't talk about yourself. Also come up with more creative punches, you used like 1 simile, but add some metaphors and wordplays if you can. Still baby takes this for dissing more. v/babytori
I'll poll the vote once you leave an honest vote in the battle in my sig
i have to say Babytori had that won cause of more punches
v/babytori
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aight,uppin 2 yo.honest votes only
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yeah kinda weak overall....but babytori came a lil harder...lady your lines and structure is ridiculous...
v/ babytori
id have to say, 1st verse was lame, had no structure and no real rhyme scheme, didnt really finish readin it because of poor structure, and also its called battle, get gritty with your rhymes, work on strong personals and punchlines towards your opponent, come strong, and dont use filler, stop with the slashes and form complete lines to make your point understandable. as well as follow rules for line limit, regardless how you wrote your verse, you still didnt even write enough to meet the minimum 10 line requirement
babytori:
nothing really spectaculr stuckout to me, there wasnt a real approach to your rhyme schem, it just seemed like it was a quick spit not really any umph!! put into it. Work on making your lines alittle more longer and structurized, work on more wordplay and personals toward your opponent. use wittyness and creative wordplay, as well as strong vocab, try to be more consistent in flow.
v/----------------babytori
b/c seemed like the battle verse was more directed at her opponent, and atleast she tried dissing her opponent, but wasnt strong as it should be, just work on it....
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ayo,uppin 3 fa more votes people.honest votin only.thanx
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i got to give it to baby tori she came harder and her bars she spit all went together some of the rhymes that lady spit didn't ryme so i got to give it to baby.
v- baby holla at my 2 battles if yall can.1oo
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