check this out!(free)

[Speats]

My Beat!
im not sure its the right link lol but check out "Smooth"
theres a dope intro and i love it

[Re. Says. P. Says.]

Smooth - Ok you need better sounds. Sounds like you just used sounds that come with like fruity loops. This beat needs a snare. And like more bizzaazz lmao you know. This doesnt do much. Like i dont get any feeling from it. But keep working on stuff man.


This doesnt sound like anything that would be in modern day hiphop. So just keep working.

Dont take offence, i was just giving you some constructed feed