Johnny always drops good shit in OM...I read alot of them like that 100th thing and the mummy story...Keep it up and u should do ur shit audio instead of textceeing all the time...
I became a fanatic, my wrist ached from jotting my rhymes
My brain was regulary jolted with shots to the spine
-good word use
100 drops and counting, just trying to top the mountain
Visualising a perfect rapper and finding a spot around him
-thanks for refurrin to me in there
I'm that nigga who can kill u in 8 bars
Fam, I SEE WHY U WANT NIGGAZ TO READ THIS!....I felt like I was w/ you all the way through the story, you hit all the transitions right on time and from what I gather, in order. So I mean, keep doin it up, hopefully I'll move along and post some shit like this in time.
very nice immagery .. the way of story telling was very ill,
i enjoyed your second stanza the most,
u used a very interesting topic .. maybe related it a little to yourself?
but non thew less a very enjoyable and cool read
props
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- Artificial Intelligence
on the most part bro this shit is nasty i jus joined but outta the ones i read i like urs the most...On the carcass of mediocraty, read the wisdom of Socrates
The philosophies of Nostradamas, visions and prophesy's....u betta watch out cuz ima surpass u;-) but ur lines are a awsome man
i may be new to this site...but I know talent when i see and hear it. From ya flow i can tell your feelin yourself. Most kats on these sites dont do that. If you cant feel your own rhymes and connect with metaphors and punches that you spit out, then you cant expect anyone else to feel ya shit on the same level, you feel me? Besides that, your structure was tite, and your flow and use of vocab was on point. Great drop playboy.
4 words:
Best to drop on O.M
lol, seriousley dope
^i meant 5 words
i really enjoyed reading it, the chorus part was really awesome. it flowed very well i thought.
yo i love this piece son, i like all ur piece keep up the good work aight homie
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....php?t=194564- that was me back then
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=225382- this is me now
( anyone see the differense)
anywayz, Johnny this was a real tight drop here, flow, strucutre, vocab, and the complexity was ammazing, i couldnt say anything negative about this drop, really dope, i enjoyed reading this cuz it had real good details, rhymes were great. great job overall, great job, keep it up and keep droppin, peace
Last edited by EyeBite; August 23rd, 2005 at 11:35 PM
this rocks mate, this is probably the best piece you have written from the pieces i have read of yours. it flows sweetly, tells a gd story, it aint repeastive or anythin either,its cool,aint a damn thing wrong wiv it honestly man, are u gunna record this beast or wat?
like this.............structure was perfect, lyriics nice and good topic keep droppin............
im dope.
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phew nice rhyming mayne.. real cool to keep the flow so solid for the whole piece... nice vocab for the most part.. the piece appears long but is an easy read from start to finish... sum interesting multis.. str8 wordplay
hot shit fosho
i gotta go up my game agian now after seeing this
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