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  1. #16
    You've Earned a Custom Title! Kstroyer's Avatar
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    my heart wishy washes in the cold cycle as my lips turn to blisters.
    struggling to elevate my love to the kind you have for moms and sisters.
    grip is loosening the pressure is too overwhelming as new house is to moving in.
    the blocks a cold place, but i stand there a record cuz my spot is grooved in.
    a fixture to the game, im throwing light in the perpetual darkness.
    as i blaze and spark this, my flicks sure, the flames on regardless.
    burst lips mine torn in agony, cuz words flip time .drag-in-me from fiction to reality.
    it saddens me, invisioning my heart on that line, listen im hurting in deep degrees.
    reluctant to relinquish my soul is what my phd suggested is my disease, aching.

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  2. #17
    lyricalgangsta.
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    her heart attached everthang gone life dont have the time to patch
    the emotions buildin up inside are about to let loose,go free and unlatch
    she los the one and only hez now the tru nigga livin in the ghettos past
    the tru love she found alast gone b for her eyes she the momenst
    she wouldda grasp
    now it all comes bak but the buiding collapsed
    like gettin lost in a mall she lost the way to life her boi the only map

  3. #18
    CaseClosed
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    Young kid cold in the dark, life's gone fore it starts.
    No more than 7, no parents around to brandish her heart.
    The life of poverty no happiness for the children today.
    She had a heart, but put it on a string and threw it away.
    Now she's standing in a empty hall, why she's where is,
    and why it's gotta be like that she just wants to be a normal kid.
    No smile, cause ain't no sunshine in hell, it's just hot.
    And looking out the window is boring she keep seeing raindrops.
    Someone make the pain stop.

  4. #19
    Disdain Exodus
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    wind blowing westward
    I'm dressed in my sunday's best
    let go of passion

    haiku form... iunno i tried

  5. #20
    Yung Caesa
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    I see a sad and lonely heart, a desperate struggle in the makin'//
    Set against a life time of all givin' and absolutely no takin'//
    A girl realisin her life was just meant to be so dam God Forsakin//
    That she's begining to think by livin she was always mistakin//
    Its a belief that's seperated her heart from her desperate soul//
    Now its just blowin away and she just cannot keep controll//
    In this vast world she seems smaller then a new-born foal//
    And all her thoughts are deadly evil and as black as coal//

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    I put my heart on a string
    For you to run wild with,
    Hoping you’d return every
    Bit of love that I showed you.

    Time would tell that you
    Weren’t interested in my heart
    & keeping in tough wouldn’t
    Ever happen.

    You held me under that willow
    Tree. Your arms felt so safe
    But you never meant what you
    Happened to say.

    I’m not even mad anymore
    But the sad thing is, I put my
    Heart on a string for you &
    You just walked away.

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