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    A lil girl abandoned by no parents, shes all on her own/
    She a lil girl she gonna be alone when she grown/
    The love she had has been taken away to heaven/
    With herself astray goes to smokin ashtrays the love she forgotten/
    Cause it will just float away as she cries tears from her eyes/
    The love floats up to the skies never seen/
    She just innocent human being not knowin what life brings/
    Its a cloudy day when love is away/
    Shes being brought up on her own who knows what she'll do/
    And we sit here not knowin what we'll do/
    She had to let go and she has to just move on/
    Until the day she meets the love again will be when shes gone/

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    "I look to a day when people will not be judged by the color of their skin, but by the content of their character."

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    View this from last year^

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    Let it float into the wind.

    Like the heart shaped balloon that left her heart,
    Drifting farther,
    As she let go of what was to be her first love,
    She wondered,

    She was eclipsed in the memory of her thoughts,
    Manifested into,
    Metamorphic pastime,
    While she watched her heart,
    Which was once in her bosom,
    Moved from that safe haven to the wind,
    Before she knew it her love was gone,
    Apathy became a bitch.
    this is the song that doesnt end, yes it goes on and on my friend, somebody started singin it not knowing what it was, and theyll continue singin it forever just because this is the song that doesnt end, yes it goes on and on my friend, somebody started singin it not knowing what it was, and theyll continue singin it forever just because

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    I was 16 yrs old,
    when my world fell apart,
    i watched as my heart,
    slowly died then popped!
    I stood there and watched,
    as if it were a dream,
    then i started to cry,
    and i dropped to my knees!
    Every dream i once drempt,
    jst floated away,
    from the grasp of my hands,
    They entered the grave!
    Everything that had once,
    destroyed my life,
    took off like a plane,
    and it wouldn't stop!
    I've felt so much pain,
    throughout the course of my life,
    but feeling this,
    made me want to end my life!
    The truth is,
    jst because something went wrong,
    don't mean you give up,
    you have to go on!
    I realized this fact,
    and i stood to my feet,
    and i watched my whole life, and all my dreams,
    float into the air!
    Now i'm finally free,
    I can start a new life,
    i can finally be,
    ME!

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    Split my soul in two and you will find a mirror.
    Look into the mirror and you will find a beast.
    Stare into the beast's eyes and you will find yourself.
    Lose yourself and you will find God's wisdom.
    Throw away God's wisdom and you will find a child.
    murder murder

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    She had my heart on a string;
    had me feeling like I was floating.
    I wish I could let go, knowing..
    missing her is so cliche.

    if you'd say things would be better
    i'll believe you, though i'll still leave.
    the noose had been severed, but
    Our loose ends were never tied.
    Rather, she wrapped them further
    around her gentle finger;
    pulling the tension in the air
    even tighter.

    Bury me in a quiet back alley.
    Hang your pictures on the walls
    around my heart. stacking bricks
    with each kiss, you've made
    a home here. with fear, boasting
    and loathing, I claimed your sketches
    resembled the art we made;
    the pain we created on canvas.
    was not the mural we began with.

    we danced in darkness,
    lasting the evening; restless.
    undecisive, yet as it had
    shadowed hope, passing so close,
    I chose living only for seeing
    death held in my hands, and
    her silhouette in a silk dress.

    She had a silver neckless,
    that was thrown in a knot
    around the ash covered clouds.
    binding light behind blinded eyes.
    looking for storms more suitable
    to the roaring thunder. a grey
    sound heading for a white wedding.

    it was bad weather we had, a black
    sun. An empty emblem of when we
    where drawn together. no colors,
    with a dotted line on the horizon.
    a love that once moved mountains.
    now brought the sky
    crashing
    .
    .
    .
    down
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    of everything existing.
    Po'ethics
    abstanticollective.

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    the wind catches her balloon,it wont come back soon....
    intombed in doom and consumed by fumes, now shes tuned....
    to tha sounds of bein lonely,no more weed or homies....
    the stress stays on me,but i can vent my time spent....
    too much, my rhymes sent,the mold to make ya mind bent....
    no daddy to teach me,no caddy for creeping,so sadly im speaking....
    my conciounse is leaking,some climax were reaching....
    emotional breaching,devotion to reaching...


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    Faded dreams of a glimpse of fun, vanish in thin air.
    Hair drenched in blood, because she should've never been there.
    As she screams for a glance, time seems to dance.
    Doctors say she'll die and for living there's no chance.
    The rapist fled and the cops couldn't find one trace.
    To help a little bit on putting together a picture of his face.
    Now she drifts and shifts to laying in a hospital in a coma.
    She dreams, of her screams, and being forced on the sofa.
    The gun pointed to her head, thinking she'd be dead.
    All she hear is a gun shot and her being covered in red.
    As she turns to see the doctor cut her open wit the blade.
    All she can remember is holding her balloon, as life begins to fade.

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    As the wind blows
    My presence slowly fades away
    I walk alone , on a cold and lonely alley
    Hopin help will come my way
    I try to gather the peices , still i cant let go
    The last peice of me flies from my fingertips
    In red , my heart does show
    Still feeling alone , with my heart as my only friend
    I tie it to a string , so it will float
    And walk beside me til the end
    As the wind blows
    I regain myself And i hold on tyte
    For I kno I will be alone in this cold alley
    Once again , but not alone , this very night

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    As the world turns frozen i put my heart on the string..
    its a funny thing but i feel the world is corroding seems the plots getting thick..
    a metaphore for my life..deep down im just a kid
    but in reality king standin on street in fronta corner stores
    as my innocense rises i stand there a child a child no more...
    im starting to brush off ur disguises..please accept my heart on this cord..
    the winds going for a knockout but im sure the child in me will endure..
    i float my heart to heavens gates Jesus waits with open arms at the door...
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    Emancipation of my heart my emotions from this world full of ahces of the heart and head nature/
    i stand alone in the alley kiting my heart up to the savior/

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    her heart attached everthang gone life dont have the time to patch
    the emotions buildin up inside are about to let loose,go free and unlatch
    she los the one and only hez now the tru nigga livin in the ghettos past
    the tru love she found alast gone b for her eyes she the momenst
    she wouldda grasp
    now it all comes bak but the buiding collapsed
    like gettin lost in a mall she lost the way to life her boi the only map
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    life goin away/no one will care/
    soul an heart tide to a string an she lets it go in the air/
    no time to lack/
    wen she lets go she pulls it back an the wind comes to to take her soul that she took back/
    abandoned in world/
    no stress 4 this little girl/
    accept the no food an no money to buy medicine so she wont hurl/
    she's tired of running and tiered of the wrong idea in these rappers flows/
    so she let go of the balloon wit her soul
    she keeps running from darkness because she doesnt like the shadows/
    because the last time she was in the dark she got beat wit bats an paddles/

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    lines so far away my hearts desire keeps goin away
    i was warned but never believed that it would end this way
    im not gay so fuck u and go away this like talkin to mary
    but i have beef wit problem he so fucked up ya thats wat i gotta say fuck u problem hahahahah herb fuck u thats my insight fuck u
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    She gave her heart away too soon this time
    Whoever said love was a victimless crime?
    Too late now, can't get it back, it's his
    If this isn't pain I don't know what is
    He promised they'd be together as husband and wife
    She now knows all about the abundant strife
    called life
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    love gone away in a flash who she thought was her man ran out in a dash
    she was soon left with the realities of life struglin with no food or cash
    her boi got scared cuz the accident was now becoin a reality so he became a fatality
    he let his body go free off a 200 story building the ground was the last thing to see
    now mom is all alone family hate how she has grown up
    and her life well thats hers and life gets tought suk it up
    she weeps everyday and night wishin to take bake the decison
    but u cant go bak in time so stop the bitchin
    and dont live life in the kitchen
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