Yesterday

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Yesterday

You remember so many dreams, you live them everytime...
Everything that you've ever seen appears to etched into your mind.
Songs replay themselves, repetition lost in hesiation, competition of patience...
Tomorrows memories we look forward before they fade into everyday situations...
Escalating into festering cries of pestilence, investigations of suggestions of allegations...
Reality lost in fantasies and fixations, waiting to be embraced by warmth of the dawn.
Days beginning with a brace of cold hailstones that are born into both day and night...
A spawn of a darkness and light, harmless but frightening... Enlighting in the best way.
Yes, dreams are forgotton but we lost them yesterday.

[sNoopfox]

This was a nice simple piece.
Well written, highlighting the word 'yesterday' helped guide the read to an accessible message.
Good stuff.

sNoopfox

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Poetry forum is slept on here,

Upp

[Taeisbeast.]

^^Tell me about it

Wow..i really like the whole concept here. Nice little layout. I liked it...9.5

[Issue]

wow a 9.5??

Wasnt worth that seriously, but yeh thank you anyway.

[Dope Name]

Wow very nice arcostic poem or however u spell it....Very creative there were some words in there that i never even known before...very nice Rhyming too. i give it a 9.9 Btw happy birthday.

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thank u got my birthday thing lol, and also for the reply! If u like it, nominate it...

[FanTa ZeE]

yeah this was a nice simple yet effective piece, i wouldn't have said 9.5 but thats only cause i have in the past seen even better from you there are things that could have been improved like any good piece, but it kept my attention, was easy to read and had some nice concepts..well done

FanTa x

[Issue]

some good feed, thank you jafu,

uppp

[FanTa ZeE]

lol @ jafu uppin this

[Eve Alminds]

it's not up to your usual stuff...but it's a good easy read...keep em up....

[Issue]

Thanks, Upppp