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  1. #1

    check n reply

    check it,
    the flow that appears/
    in my mind that engineers/
    fearless, lyrics/
    clearly u see bitches avoid interferance/
    i got clearance to enter/
    my spit, spins like a sphincter/
    gets u stuck like a splinter/
    without liftin a finger/
    i rap quick swift moves/
    just flow through the tube/
    choose not to shoot/
    just to exemplify my mood/
    its my meditation/
    for the mind deprivation/
    confrontation is not a choice/
    so proceed and lose your voice/
    im cruisin the streets on the low with the heat/
    feet planted in the curb/
    standing on my every word/
    learn how i burn verses, the fire burns massively/
    satins spawn, the devils advocate moves throughout passively/
    it has to be the explanation/
    of the information stored/
    well deep in the genesis/
    of my cranium cord/

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    it was nice, pretty damn good for a new comer! work on the flow a little more.

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