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    SS: Fear

    .. fear
    my life .. my love .. my world .. is just ..
    ..a prison of flawless failures
    roughley strapped down
    by the rules of dictators like duvaliers
    its weird,
    ..the struggles so inconvenient
    started too juggle & rearranging those feelings
    ..just to give a misleading impression
    without a verbal interchange, or any kind of dealings
    hiding behind this mask, facing a great task
    it just got out of hand,
    the words spoken were mine to understand
    but it came too me as basque..
    and this concealed corridor of boxed memories...
    still.. what do they teach?
    unable too cover up each of a sealed section for protection
    ..in my mind and a truth so far to reach..
    though the goals for myself, are cleary pictured..
    ..but my visions are confound
    confused and perplexed, by the grip of this destroying spellbound
    ..puting a damage to my common sence..
    and i cannot deny.. that some nights i cried..
    still with us ..
    i was always in accordance, but this time
    my system .. just failed to comply..
    and this spontaneous disintegration just ionized me,
    no i cant be FREE
    and as for to many off us..
    the question stays, though the answer keeps unremained..
    people's and my mind in abnormal state's
    in which development has stopped prematurely by their own judgements sustained
    so yes you shall understand .. .. .. that,
    the engagement was fought
    and it was so bad.. cause with that, the tie turned
    my strenth burned and
    i got decisively defeated in combat
    .
    .
    .
    ..can you smell my fear now?
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    Dude...

    Way deep, way complex...

    I'm trying to get some shit done here at work so I'm a have to edit in some beter feedback after I get to read this again.

    But supreme vocab, man...hats off for using it right.

    Nice shit, I'll get back at this, but dopeness so far.

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    well

    to violent dawg u gotta be versatile but still was good
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    ^you cant even understand the words i used, DIE!

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    chill fall back dawg listen up i was just saying u gotta change it up man sometimes
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    le cambiaré muchacho blanco, lmao

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    eboniks next time you decide to leave feed make sure you have a clue as to what your talking about man. I am closing your threads utnil that day!

    Eddy, I have only a sec, but as BTK said, I se nothing but dopeness at this point. Let it maranade with me a bit, and when I get some free time we shall discuss.


    Oh yeah, that the shit right there, we need a three way collab, Eddy, BTK and myself, this is getting the wheels turning. Solid fucken peice man.

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    yea its cool, just get back to this aight?

    and word too that collab .. should be dope
    .. avíseme como, y cuando su bajada bien ..



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    what the hell are u talking bout dawg who hell are u,man how u gonna tell somebody what can and can't say man ur a fucking joke hip hop is freedom dawg to express u need to learn that fucking bitch see me in a battle see if i don't rip ur little,i ll bomb on your sunshine state ass , that's why nobody really good comes out of LA bitch except for game and Snoop i cna't say pac cuz he isn't ven from the west coast biatch

    Read our rules, if you have an issue with them, please don't post in this forum. That is all...
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    who?

    but serious kid, dont get a heart attack online .. aight

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    nigga i ain't talkin to u dawg this chump wanna put rules on fuck this the internet this is rap and i never had censor myself so fuck that
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    yea but that chump is my dawg, so stfu .. okay rules are rules .. dont sweat it.

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    I think he means me eddy, yeah I must suck because I'm from LA. LMFAO, this was on a very high level here eddy, complex and gripping. I'm still chewing on it so to speak. The scheme came off like butter, so with the vocab well used, diction comes off nice as hell. I'm impressed here, still digging, but a good peice will do that to me...

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    haha word, .. thanks man ..

    and i know he was talking too you .. ; )

    Quote Originally Posted by Edicius
    yea but that chump is my dawg, so stfu .. okay rules are rules .. dont sweat it.

    ..an eh peep his ei thread, the ban is on you

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