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First Topic: Bastard Child
His dad, died - what his mother told em - cried, wicked an lies, tears of envy fogged his eyes
Daddy was never there an daddy will never be, why did he leave you why did he leave me?
The new born exclaimed, with a piercing cry, his mother could of shot herself if it wernt for the sky
Lookin down on her, givin her hope, all for an orgasim, she pleasently wrote, in her diary
Now the pages all torn, babys born, Proclomations and acusations assembled into war cries
Whoz your daddy? the kids wud joke, David tried to resist, although slowly, forcefully addicted to coke
Looking for a father, contemplating a plan, for another man to place a ring on mother's hand
BUt never, did he get a chance, to introduce his mom to one bachlor, because she was found dead on the floor
Blood flood the carpet as Davids sorrow for himslef never would mourn, a broken heart, tattered and torn
From a seed to a full grown man, his life slipped away like quicksand, Unfair, uneven, unwell
His half ass life now a full living hell - solutions, buzzed in his head, but they wud all stop - if just he were dead
A strong word, threatining and empty, Coxed his gun, the barrel wasent empty
Made a prayer, never to die, Pulled the trigger, shot himself, as the sky came level with his eyes...
Next topic, Red Rain
I was a bastard child, now i just laugh and smile
when i was in school i was actin bad and wild
throwin crayons, and balled up paper
pourin glue on the floor, and told my teacher that i hate her
while the other kids took naps and ate snacks
i was in time out, for hittin some boy in his back
durin recess, i was at my worst
makin kids get off of the swing, just so i could swing first
I hogged the water fountains, and took lunches
if you didnt give the goods up then i threw a few punches
I seen the principals office at least twice a week
and had my mom come to my school more then me
I broke windows with rocks, and stabbed kids with pencils
stole candy from the store, and everyone thought i was mental
next topic: you win a 100 million dollars in the lottery but your parents die the same day you win
Last edited by RoX-aka-kgh; May 5th, 2005 at 06:14 PM
I used to sell drugs
and buss shells n slugs
now i spit flows
stealin souls from thugs
scratchin off my two tickets, texas lotto 3 pick it/
i hit on one of my tickets, now my money i get it/
100million in cash, i want it all in advance/
before i eva thought about money, my parent i had/
head on collision, bloody streets, diesal hitem in front of me/
i could only watch, as the two burnedddd in hot energy/
funeral expences at hand, all this money god damn/
should i be selfish and spend it, or leave it in gods hands/
i'ma pray for a sign, leave all of it behind/
payed for the funeral, damn it knocked me down two a dime/
next topic ( in church and a female whisper in your ear sayin she gone let you fuck, and every body can hear the conversation in church on the speakers.)
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"respected battle"
me vs. da_image (4-5)
alot of dick riding though in this battle. but mc to mc he was good.
There I was praisin and God and all
Then she talkin bout how she wanna suck my balls
How she been waitin for me to drop her draws
Showed me how she could fuccen flex her jaws
I was amazed by her talent I was left in awe
So I told her I meet her in the bathroom stalls
She got up and walked and I noticed everyone looked and stoped
Pastor looking at me like I came to church to rob
Heard some little whispers bout how I just got caught
Cuz the speakers in the hall recorded her say she wanted to fuckk
next topic (Judgement day and God lets u choose who goes to heaven, U or the love of ur life)
man the bells rang and next thing i kno im done
god gives me a choice i can go in or the girl that i thinks the one
a tear comes to my eye and we are seperated forever
to think that such a love could be severed
i said take her christ for shes an angel
then i seen things from a different angle
went to hell and i could still remember our first kiss
so i walked up to satan and i said this
yo man wussup i kno u got a bad rap
so ill fix it for u..took out tha 45 and busted a cap
the devil only laughed and said boi u got balls
had my ass hangin from sum rope on one of his walls
all in this time i could see her smile
so i broke lose and consulted the old ones from the emerald isle
in case u didnt kno i was wiccan a practicer of white magic
and i found myself in this situation quite tragic
they said DJ a tear shed for love brings u closer together
then u two shall soar birds of a feather
tears dropped down quenching the thirst of torcherd souls
i was reunited with my queen and my desitny became full
(when you are kept from your gf who is your first and only love by ur parents)
Judgement Day
The, universe covered with 7 plagues. 7 Dayz of Gods rage, mage of the guilty, savoir of the innocent, I pray and I pray, but just cant seem ta paint this world, only coulours showin are white an grey, I run in rage out of my sight, if i were lookin back on that moment - I would have never dashed away, I woulda stayed there with my girl an prayed... but yea, believe it or not, after being turned to salt from lookin at the burning bush, God gave me a choice to infinitally love or rot, My girl, alisha, she was everything to me, although she, God - wouldnt understand this resentless plee, gave me the chance and now ill take it, said together as one, well combine together ta make it, God spoke an ancient tongue, whats that, I could understand, suddenly I felt Alisha's hand, inside of me, God had sent my plee, and now our flesh is one - as the earth, moon, sun - the whole universe had become one,
In HEAVEN
damn ^ do punkrockrappers topic
PUNK ROCK RAPPERS SUCK
They spit threads like the clothes of them r dark
I'd like to be the car driver, sparkin wit a Sniper Rifle as I Link-n-Park
Comin out wit full gauge M-16's destroyin the bands
Punkin them until they wet their own pants
They're nuthin but a bunch of nerds dressed in black
If they only wore what they sing, completely drag
Their cd's only have a few tracks, so sell it on diskettes
Dominated these KORNy mofos, leavin them like LIMP bizkits
They say this "KID ROCK" rocks cuz his name is Kid Rock
These Punks say they aint gay, but left alone, they'll suck their own cocks
I came in here to try to set an example
And I stayed in, cause I actually want to place heads....
on a mantle
Topic: You completely mudered a person with your rhymes
I came in here to try to set an example
And I stayed in, cause I actually want to place heads....
on a mantle
murdered? shit this is a bloodbath,
my wrath,
lyrical bruce lee with a bow staff,
and while I do it I laugh,
cackle as I apply the shackles,
of an undeniable,
unbeatble flow to any foe,
this a one-eight-seven,
beheading,
of words and verbs unto a permanent bedding,
six feet deep beneath,
it grim and I reap,
your soul to keep dont make a peep,
tryin but fallin short my report from the afterlife,
is long overdue to pass the mike,
death come a knockin by my side,
forces collide,
as I provide the great devide,
between,
best and worst,
unquenchable thirst
obsession perverse,
watch the blood spurt,
I might enjoy makin you hurt,
now I revert back to the old me,
transformation as the clock hits three,
sunset is coming,
humming a eulogy,
tune of your last rites,
plight of the foe who attempted a fight,
but fell before me slayed,
forgot to pray,
salvation live to fight another day,
my blade fell on the upstart,
pierced his heart,
limb by limb torn apart,
flame is dim,
future grim,
many sins and grins,
nows the end,
make ready to defend but ya cant contend.
topic: being happy on a sunny day
smilling wildly into the sun, ice cream and some bubble gum/
women are on the run, i'mabout to have me some fun/
i'm smilling some call me gay, the happy kind anyway/
like santa up on his slay, nose red, cuz he sniffin hey/
i'm sittin here in advance, at the park tryna dance/
this is poetry shit to me, i aint tryna write no romance/
stories i like to tell, do not want to go to hell/
in heaven livin so great, one sin, damn i must have fell/
ayo really i dont like this topic lol. i'm neva happy. but hey next. how do you plead?
(judge sentences you to 3 life sentences in a womens prison).
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vs. mrlove (5-0)
vs. seks_wun (5-0)
vs. jookz (5-3)
vs. killa_P (5-0)
vs. ESG_silk (5-0)
vs. miz_kilt_you (5-2)
"respected battle"
me vs. da_image (4-5)
alot of dick riding though in this battle. but mc to mc he was good.
Your Guilty, your guilty, your guilty says the voice of the judge/Ya sentenced three years in a womans prison its my appointment to fuck/No boys in da club nuttin but some bi-ass hoes/triple penetration they waitin for these triad pros/Slide back home im in my cell talkin to the Head Bitch/Head Sick evrything perfect i worked it and had her legs twitch/Segments broke into pieces we in a different place/Switchin states to be wit these women rather than a niggas face/"Get Away" ,Mobb deep puts me in a trance or a hex/The next topic talk about how you feel in prison after they cancelled your death/
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