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  1. #1
    Tha 1 Phenom
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    LIfe IS LIke

    Some homework i had to do on unity we were readin lord of the flies check it out

    LIfe IS LIke
    ___________

    Life is like a countdown, ya waitin till it reaches the end
    for better or worse, you’ve been through it all with your friends
    This school of hardknocks, and the floor is wooden
    you fall face first to the ground, and you think all is ruined

    But for better or worse you’ve been through it all with your friends
    girlfriends come and go, but real friends are by your side, through thick and thin.
    A struggle of everyday in your life, trying to do what god would do, through the views of ones’ eyes
    Sometimes it feels like, a cave with no way out, but their has to be a light shinning bright
    The pain gets deep, veins grow green and high, punctured holes winded by sharp knives
    Somedays are cold and made to weap, never sunny with longer nights,
    But others bring joys and treats, like honey in Bee hives

    Though, my sweet dreams are often intensified,
    This one sunny morning, something caught my eyes
    and never would you have believed what came to my surprise
    No one had died from, homicide or suicide
    The pain kept in me was all frail and died
    With joy comes a struggle, i finally understood the true meaning of life
    Last edited by Tha 1 Phenom; May 5th, 2005 at 08:01 PM

  2. #2
    Tha 1 Phenom
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    ight upp me

  3. #3
    mindone
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    I liked it , needs some work as do mine. I would explain more but im not that good at explaining. Go figure.

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