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Thread: LW Title Match: I'm Deon (5-1) vs Jay. Walker (4-1)

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    LW Title Match: I'm Deon (5-1) vs Jay. Walker (4-1)

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    Last edited by Jay Walker; May 1st, 2005 at 01:22 AM
    You really think ur tough... come 'n try me man
    I’ll get a hiccup that isn’t spasms of the diaphragm

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    no, lets make it like 16....i actually have better battles this week.

    and wtf@ me battling him for this........you see that 1 L in his record? I put it there.

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    g'head and post im done and waiting on u....u can go either 16 or 20 like u wanted, but i wont drop first since u asked for the max.

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    Yea...check it
    Jae’s bout to rock ya, here’s a secret, yer guts all that prospers
    & I’m not kidding, you’re The Future...dude gettin cut from the roster
    So just stop nerd...
    The keys sore & ya need more; I’m breakin this weak whore
    Cause he thought he came stiff, but... ya just makin the keyboard
    & now that D’s wore, I threw a sympathy party, started w/ text
    I told him to show at this street number...and he modeled address
    A throttled success? Nah, Deon’s lame in the game of the wealth
    So you’re right... “People often ask who I am”
    ...B/c ya aint made a name for yaself
    Plus, you say the same bit, but you still remain quick
    Cause he’ll come with aim... jokes and other played shit
    Damn, G, just save it, you’re outta shape, bearin extra large
    So if you see D ‘n a Bowflex...I’m wearin camouflage
    And don’t worry uncles, this fag’s far from fucks,
    The only niece on Deon’s...comes in a car or truck.
    Faggot, don’t spar ya luck, fuck famous people, enough’s been said
    I’ll leave you with rockstars...AND a halo above ya head
    And hey, yo, he loves a wedge, a burger w/ carrots and things
    So if you win the LW... you MIGHT be able to wear it as a ring
    I swear this dudes a fling, the Real World, he’s lustin to hit
    But...
    When I’m throwin, I’m Landon...while your punches just Miz

    Just gimme the belt.
    You really think ur tough... come 'n try me man
    I’ll get a hiccup that isn’t spasms of the diaphragm

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    To be real, just thank ya idols and stop
    cuz if Spit wasnt dicking Jace, you woldnt even HAVE a title shot
    drops aint crack, this player should know
    only time he'll pump on the block...will involve a neighboorhood ho
    concepts all lack, yea you strivin whore
    flips makin no splash...like jumpin from the kiddie divin board
    you'll find'em sore, he'll be mad at me soon's he learn
    that imma kick his ass so far
    he'll need 'the guide to the galaxy' to return
    yea you gon lose, but here's a tip for this wack kid
    flip one of my lines...and you TOO can make the mag like Mac did
    quit actin, good wins? explain how...
    nigga's prolly thankin his lucky stars..
    and slidin the mods dough via paypal
    bum,folks see deon, and thats how they peep the winner
    but i'll put a slug in ya stomach...
    and not the kind ya poor ass eats for dinner
    whats funny is, i cant believe how bad this ho sucks
    with those lines...i see why feeble stopped usin wordplay so much
    you still on my crew huh? just cuz we better bitch
    let go, cuz at the present...The Future's just somethin you'll never get
    my progression trick? i leave niggas shook and succeed
    i aint took this league seriously, yet you seriously get took in this league

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    Dunno, I was just feeling Jay's more. I didn't get any feel from Deon's verse, it was decent at best. Jay wasn't that much better, but he had some more witty lines and attempted with wordplay, which at least shows he tried more... and it reflects.

    Vote: Jay Walker
    Wrecks.

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    & now that D’s wore, I threw a sympathy party, started w/ text
    I told him to show at this street number...and he modeled address
    Damn, G, just save it, you’re outta shape, bearin extra large
    So if you see D ‘n a Bowflex...I’m wearin camouflage
    ^that's some hard shit right there homie, liked these...

    vs

    To be real, just thank ya idols and stop
    cuz if Spit wasnt dicking Jace, you woldnt even HAVE a title shot
    quit actin, good wins? explain how...
    nigga's prolly thankin his lucky stars..
    and slidin the mods dough via paypal


    OK, here's the deal... both of you only had a couple quotables that hit hard, so you even there... the difference is in the fact that Deon flipped a couple concepts of me n' com, which is sad...

    Me vs Born this season:
    most of ya shit is wack, similar to what a nerd say
    and those corny lines, is why Feeble gets shit for wordplay

    Deon:
    whats funny is, i cant believe how bad this ho sucks
    with those lines...i see why feeble stopped usin wordplay so much


    and...

    Com vs Me last season
    take me seriously, cuz you can't take me... seriously.

    Deon
    i aint took this league seriously, yet you seriously get took in this league


    on top of that, Deon had a couple of weak relation type punches (the guide to the galaxy omfg gimme a break, and the 'slugs' one *smh*)

    so, the belt should go to Jay dot

    v/Jay

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    Jay def. shined on this..

    Deon you my Future fam son, but Jay got this one..

    i'll explain if i have to.

    v/Jay.

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    word@ me flippin MORE lines from LLL heads....it'll keep happening cuz I dont read battles here.

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    i dont think the second punch spit put up was any kind of flipping. anyways

    [JAY]
    Jae’s bout to rock ya, here’s a secret, yer guts all that prospers
    & I’m not kidding, you’re The Future...dude gettin cut from the roster
    worded real bad, just read it without the dots. wtf[5]
    So just stop nerd...
    The keys sore & ya need more; I’m breakin this weak whore
    Cause he thought he came stiff, but... ya just makin the keyboard
    simple wordplay with no real flip to it.[5]
    & now that D’s wore, I threw a sympathy party, started w/ text
    I told him to show at this street number...and he modeled address
    word, ive definately seen a dress wordplay a LOT lately, but this was cool[7]
    A throttled success? Nah, Deon’s lame in the game of the wealth
    So you’re right... “People often ask who I am”
    ...B/c ya aint made a name for yaself
    never seen him say that, but okay.[6.5]
    Plus, you say the same bit, but you still remain quick
    Cause he’ll come with aim... jokes and other played shit
    old, lame[4]
    Damn, G, just save it, you’re outta shape, bearin extra large
    So if you see D ‘n a Bowflex...I’m wearin camouflage
    this was nice[7.5]
    And don’t worry uncles, this fag’s far from fucks,
    The only niece on Deon’s...comes in a car or truck.
    what the fuck. good wordplay but NO DISS at all.[5.5]
    Faggot, don’t spar ya luck, fuck famous people, enough’s been said
    I’ll leave you with rockstars...AND a halo above ya head
    this was aright, old concept[5.5]
    And hey, yo, he loves a wedge, a burger w/ carrots and things
    So if you win the LW... you MIGHT be able to wear it as a ring
    didnt like it.[4.5]
    I swear this dudes a fling, the Real World, he’s lustin to hit
    But...
    When I’m throwin, I’m Landon...while your punches just Miz
    hah this was nice. you didnt really connect with the setup, just stuck it in there, but nice punch.[8]

    [DEON]
    To be real, just thank ya idols and stop
    cuz if Spit wasnt dicking Jace, you woldnt even HAVE a title shot
    aright ..[5.5]
    drops aint crack, this player should know
    only time he'll pump on the block...will involve a neighboorhood ho
    aright ..[5.5]
    concepts all lack, yea you strivin whore
    flips makin no splash...like jumpin from the kiddie divin board
    aright ... do something.[5.5]
    you'll find'em sore, he'll be mad at me soon's he learn
    that imma kick his ass so far
    he'll need 'the guide to the galaxy' to return
    hah, this was kinda corny, but cool[6.5]
    yea you gon lose, but here's a tip for this wack kid
    flip one of my lines...and you TOO can make the mag like Mac did
    niice, feelin this.[7]
    quit actin, good wins? explain how...
    nigga's prolly thankin his lucky stars..
    and slidin the mods dough via paypal
    aright, coulda been worded better.[6]
    bum,folks see deon, and thats how they peep the winner
    but i'll put a slug in ya stomach...
    and not the kind ya poor ass eats for dinner
    that shtunk. old as balls yo[5]
    whats funny is, i cant believe how bad this ho sucks
    with those lines...i see why feeble stopped usin wordplay so much
    aright ..[5.5]
    you still on my crew huh? just cuz we better bitch
    let go, cuz at the present...The Future's just somethin you'll never get
    word,[6]
    my progression trick? i leave niggas shook and succeed
    i aint took this league seriously, yet you seriously get took in this league
    shoulda said like, 'you seriously should get took from the league' or something. but okay[6.5]


    aright, well this was super close. jay got a 58.5 and deon got a 59. so yeah, basically deon won for having a more consistantly aright verse. jay had a few dope punches and a few that were just too blah to handle. so yeah, aight battle.

    v. deon

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    I am shocked at the remarks made about me, yet two kids that are supposidly 'dope' drop something of this nature. Jay had the better wording and was consistent, but his punches were horrible in getting the point across, some lines werent even a punch to me just a personal joke that rhymes, Deon had horrible structure and alot of concepts that have been done before, really nothing worth quoting or anything i thought should of been since thinking this would be a high caliber battle. I'm ashamed yet antisipating my belt shot. vote Jay Walker

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    who said i was dope

    theeeeeeey lied to ya-Juvi

    Im an above average nigga......u better ask the right people next time

    lol......congrats Jay....I will step it up.....sike.....playoffs i'll do better tho.

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    word thx. also, thx for whoever called me dope.
    You really think ur tough... come 'n try me man
    I’ll get a hiccup that isn’t spasms of the diaphragm

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    yo that was wack alll yoh wack and ill battle anyone here and rip um

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