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    Sonnet

    Boiling inside my thoughts trap me tight
    trying to clear my mind using some light
    fighting to hear and to find to ease fright
    clogged views of the present disturb my sight

    A mental cleaning's achieved through dreaming
    the present's erasing the past, seeming
    to fulfill what's not ready to achieve
    when daylight comes, the fantasy can leave

    inspiration comes quick like gusts of wind
    leaving too fast for effect to begin
    I cannot take advantage of the strength
    when all my visions are of such short length

    My goal is final with pen to paper
    take traits of mother earth and restate her

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    upping

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    well you've got the 14 lines, and the 10 syllables per line. What kind of sonnet is this where its 7 couplets? and its supposed to be five foots of unstressed then stressed. At least you got the 10 syllable down.

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    yeah^^^ pssfffhhhhh geez.

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    Last edited by Mantra; April 25th, 2005 at 11:19 PM

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    Guess I was way off. With the syllable count, I can still put this to good use though.

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