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  1. April 19th, 2005, 04:29 AM #1
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    -"Lowered Contemplations"-

    new to tha site first drop on here

    too many chicks have atkins, reachin fo coke
    celulite on her eye lashes..... keepin em closed
    fat chicks in g strings? try tieing ground beef on a rope
    or using dental floss to ......balance jello
    hell yo....its nice to re-live the moments back-when
    ya grandpa caught a heart attack-in
    the living room watchin his niece get bashed-in
    from the back-end..... on "sluts gone madness"
    if u tired of hand boning, home alone moanin
    internet has a buy a wife service..
    use discovery on ya purchase, frequent flyer miles are perfect
    to ship her Home_with....its beneficial.."no Roamin"
    well this new president is wack as shit..high gas prices..
    no one has Cash-kid....
    throw clinton out of office cause monica sucked his dick..u blasphamis
    stupid asses, oval office orgasms dont fertilize it lowers taxes..
    speakin of taxes..we pay that for cops to sit on their asses
    laughin at-us...uncle sam gets a portion from Radar Beam Trackers!
    lysol disinfectant wipes now hits on the market
    with an ad.."got a constipated ass..now u can feel like ur takin a shit in a garden"
    probably create a quiker tree markin.
    so many dumb ideas..are all of em sour?
    na wait till glades makes anus fresh 'plug'-ins" so u could 'fart flowers..

    great we got "K-9 dogs",
    who need to smell another nuts to "see its male-parts"
    it can also sniff shit piss and give a paw..but if it bites ya hard
    bashin its dumb ass onto the floor..
    only gets u assault and battery on an "officer of the law!"
    i always seein men with hair picks.rude..
    shit a chicks camel toe afro need hair picks-too
    peoples intelligence just being-dumb
    cause 'Homo-sapiens' and 'homo-sapiens' dont 'MIX "Homo_'Genius"

    (homogenious..and Genus of species..)

    iight tis all first post ever what up..?

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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=168895
    Last edited by .On-UrB.; April 19th, 2005 at 05:18 AM

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  2. April 19th, 2005, 04:52 AM #2
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    sup|?

    i'm reading your work and um thinking your rhymes are ok could be worked on-sum of the bars i was confused as what was suppost to rhyme and shit.but for real it ok just need sum work on homie!
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  3. April 19th, 2005, 05:19 AM #3
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    ok good feed back i apreciate it...this isnt my usual drop, kinda outa of the norm, i know how to flow...the point was in the message

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  4. April 19th, 2005, 05:50 PM #4
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    um, come on, som more people peep this shit,, need someone wit brains to drop some comments

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  5. April 19th, 2005, 08:02 PM #5
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    up up up
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  6. April 19th, 2005, 08:22 PM #6
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    Aim for tha head/ when u say im gon getem nigga//Aim for tha head/ when u say im gon getem nigga//Aim for tha head/ when u say im gon getem nigga//cass lit they ass just to let them know u aint playin witem
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    its deep buit ur rhymes werent hot at all man u need to work on that u need to have tha whole package but its ok for a newbie overall verse rate- 4.5/10
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  7. April 19th, 2005, 08:26 PM #7
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    thanks for the feed back...lol alot of u keep talkin about the rhyme..
    u know i had no scheme in this...no real thoughts or consentration on rhyme"
    its all in the message,..
    take it for that,, but thank u,

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  8. April 19th, 2005, 11:47 PM #8
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    I guess if you're new this was an iight peace, But still alot of improvment can be done.
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