Thought it was a Dream

[SirusX]

Yo,

This was a really nice peice Na Ledge.
Spoke to me more then alot of shit on this board.
I liked it.

[Na~Ledge]

thanks for the feed guys

[Deviate]

This was very good... I enjoyed reading it.... It was probably you're best piece yet. I was very impressed. The vocabulary was excellent, good flow... Great story line... Good use of assonance... Could of done with a little structuring but that's no big problem at all... There's little for me to fault. I'd just have to say keep it up... Keep writing it's only going to improve.

If you could check out "An Angel's Feather" in my sig I'd appreciate it...

Nice piece...

Peace

[Na~Ledge]

thanks dev...I hit ur's up . An Al how you gon say I need to improve and not say wha I need to improve on.

[Na~Ledge]

last uppin.............

[Na~Ledge]

last uppin for real...............

[Na~Ledge]

cause i can