10- 20 lines due in 35 mins
LyricalDisciple
Sota Stunner
10- 20 lines due in 35 mins
any competitors
come up to this predator
and be faded
cuz i'm articulated
i'll battle with the best
and they'll be stunned like the rest
so put my rhymes to tha test
cuz you're just a bump on my quest
to destroy fake m.c.'s
like tha puff daddy's
in it for tha paperz
you wack ass traitors
you'll never be true hip hop
and you'll and always be stopped
short of your goal
you'll be burned up like coal
you'll be sacraficed for tha sake
of making my world a better place
for tha hip hop kind
who are always tryin'
to blow up tha mic
and keep tha game tight
so much respect to tha real m.c.'s
and fu** you to tha smoked up trees.
running out of time
his avatar appears to be a man in a dream as a don//
he dreams of being like his mentor al capone//
im overwelmed by my battle that im bout to do against this kid stunna//
you seem like some easy prey so basically im gettin out to hunt ya//
i dont know how it would help but you can have a head start//
call me the soul grabber...i rip out niggas pride that relies in they heart//
you obviously are related to gump, cuz you look stumped//
you miss lil lady.... well jenny misses you...but i forgot to tell ya she wuz wit ya friend too//
i think about your life dude n i start to laff, cuz you played wit ya self in the bac of history class//
you must have been thinkin of how mommy looked last night when you seen them titties//
you tryin to get your cheese the fast way...well grow some cuz to me your just a rat in a city//
trap you the easy way...trick cuz i learned how to be real n gritty//
All We Need Is The Votes So Someone Hit Us Up Wit Comments N Polls
wat it do yall we upin for votes and feedback
yall need to vote wat is wrong with yall emcees
good battle.......
stunna: lines are to simple, not flowing just rhyming....
LDisp:good structure..................
my vote goes to LyricalDisciple .
v/LyricalDisciple
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"Thinking back when we first learned to use rubbers
He never learned so in turn I'm kidnapping his baby's mother
My hand around her collar, feeding her cheese
She said the taste of dollars was shitty so I fed her fifties
About his whereabouts I wasn't convinced
So I kept feeding her money 'til her shit started to make sense " Jay-z
Im tha Mortal Sinz captian, cap you, then cap him, you aint no kin, so dont try to pretend as if you were in/ niggah
Victims
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come on gets some votes in here ill vote on some of yalls where is the support
My vote goes to sota stunner your lines were more sylish than lyrical so u get my vote
vote on these
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=184058
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=185220
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=185173
my vote is defintely have to go to sota stunner he was hott
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aight we need some votes and feedback man
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