Check in's are due by Wednesday.
10-20 Lines, agree on it with your opponent.
Verses are due by Friday 11:59 PM eastern.
Vote on 3 battles and leave links.
Only LLL competitors may vote.
[only those with a battle this week]
Check in's are due by Wednesday.
10-20 Lines, agree on it with your opponent.
Verses are due by Friday 11:59 PM eastern.
Vote on 3 battles and leave links.
Only LLL competitors may vote.
[only those with a battle this week]
Te in.
im seriously not showing
i never signed back in
i'll retain my 3-1 record....i said last week dont gimme a battle
feeble asked that i drop this week....go your 10 and when im sure you've posted i'll drop
14 instead
net acess is fucked in the game so imma have mac post it
i usually post when the verses are due, its always done on purpose
while every deadline you have usually sums up all ya verses
im a few steps ahead..yur shits like a slump, but dude
if you ever catch my drift...you could sail to another country too
ruining every chance...of ever scoring on dates
cuz when jay walker home, she usually closes the door in his face
sadly enough, women say to get ass he'll need wits and luck
cuz if theres a will, theres away.....messages when he hits them up
he dont wanna admit im better, while im serving this queer
but if he gave credit where it was due
...itd be enough to pay the server for years
I'll kick this fag when he's down, its just the mob way
so when theres $pit all on his chest...
watchem try and make the mod gay
with women? they say he aint packin, but i admit, he found respect
when i leftem well hung...after tieing a noose 'round his neck
Deon's verse, btw.
Last edited by >Inertia>; April 13th, 2005 at 11:20 PM
damn son
mac & deon be havin babies
thnx mac
its lettin me view now
This fat bastard’s a bluff; Jae’s punchin steady & tough
I’d lay weight to ya face...but there’s already enough
Ya, I’m ready to punch, Deon’s just a frontin bitch
Yappin...ho botox a lot, just look at his fuckin lips
Took to the jungle ‘n shit, no lie, bait seen for my test
Got the eye of the tiger, & I aint mean you’re the best
Dude, ya poor in text, don’t try & make up quickly instead
Fat fuck, Deon covergirls... his face AND bitches in bed
You quittin w/ text? Audio hungry, but he aint got tubes
...He WAS gonna rock mics...but I guess he ate that too
Yes he a lame fat dude, writtin’ gay, D’s non fancy
This game... Ubisoft, and we aint playin Tom Clancy’s
Dude, you can’t hand me, fuckin fag, I’m burnin his fat
Think Deon’s in like Flint...but postin his verse, I learned it’s Mac.
Jaecen Burress
why u aint just post my pic to go along with ya verse?
votes
B/c everyone already knows what you look like...
Jaecen Burress
but IM CONCEITED AND WANNA LOOK AT THAT SEXXY FAT MAN DEON YOU JUST DESCRIBED.
i usually post when the verses are due, its always done on purpose
while every deadline you have usually sums up all ya verses
coulda been worded a lot better, but I liked the concept
ruining every chance...of ever scoring on dates
cuz when jay walker home, she usually closes the door in his face
Got a laugh outta me.
sadly enough, women say to get ass he'll need wits and luck
cuz if theres a will, theres away.....messages when he hits them up
A harder laugh this time.
vs.
This fat bastard’s a bluff; Jae’s punchin steady & tough
I’d lay weight to ya face...but there’s already enough
Got another laugh.
Yes he a lame fat dude, writtin’ gay, D’s non fancy
This game... Ubisoft, and we aint playin Tom Clancy’s
Heh.
Okay this wasn't too bad of a battle, both had personals and was quite funny on either end, and Jae... Dont take it personal like last time im just being honest. You threw way too many fat jokes on em and that got old after a while.. Just took the funny out of it. But those two lines quoted were your best in my opinion and were nicely worded and the timing was right. Deon... You came pretty funny, Wittier than Jae in my opinion too. Jae came witty in the last two bars (which were quite good.) And you came witty in about 4 bars... But only one didnt hit right. Other than that the structure I have no complaints. I believe I'm Deon took this for putting more mind to it... Yet Jae had the better wordplay, Deon camemore doper.
v/ - I'm Deon... And I'm serious, no hate Jae.
I'm Deon
i usually post when the verses are due, its always done on purpose
while every deadline you have usually sums up all ya verses
Jay Walker
umm, well didnt seem to find much
overall this was kinda blah, but Deon came with the bland yet funny personals that out-punches Jay Walker, some of Jays punches were worded retardedly, but thats probably just me. Descent battle, and Deon, hope you stay in so others can get there chance
v- Deon
2-0, whachu mean get their chance?
yall plottin on me or something? lolll
Deon
i usually post when the verses are due, its always done on purpose
while every deadline you have usually sums up all ya verses
sadly enough, women say to get ass he'll need wits and luck
cuz if theres a will, theres away.....messages when he hits them up
Jay
Didn't really see anything that did it for me.
It just seemed like you were reachin Jay...especially with the botox line. Deon only had 2 couplets I was really feelin. The second couplet wasn't all that hard hittin, but it was definitely funny.
Anyway, sum it up...vote - Deon
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