holla at me peeps!!!!!

[DA GRIM REPA]

Yo
im dat nigga that crush niggaz jaws like they swolling rocks
smoke haze till i go da colour of fox
since ure life aint worth shit, im'a put u in a car with gasoline and watch dat bitch blow up with fumes of steam
rap war lord, wrestle with my self when im spittin
im so evil, i picture myself fuckin da devils mrs and buss hot seamen
rip ure skin off and use ure insides 4 weed
cuz u can spit a few barz u think ure betta than me
nigga fuck you, fuck ure mans and fuck what u thinking
u need 2 shut ure mouth cuz ure whole flow stinking
hide behind trees with camoflauge and bled in
when i see ure ass i start shootin, and pause ure life like computer dat need rebooting
im da absolute high grimey nigga with flows that like razors
cut u up bad, sever ure head with a sabar
ya'll cudnt get signed if u had cast on ure arm and a pen dat workin gud like troops in afghdistan
im stronga than 2,000 niggaz liffin a massive ball and swinging chain,that cud end ure life fasta than twista spittin game
my neurones work fasta and betta than u
which means i can solve da hardest equations without a pen or pencil
get it together nigga like a marriage
the way u spit make signing look way easier 4 a cabbage nigga!!!

holla at da kid.

[Flyp]

i don't know if you want my opinion (still a beginner) but while on the whole the piece was ok, some stuff kinda got me confused..

'my neurones work fasta and betta than u
which means i can solve da hardest equations without a pen or pencil'

neurones that work faster and better than others doesn't actually mean that you are any smarter than other people.. just something you might want to know..

[IllLyricalthaDon]

got flow?...plain an simple son your rhyme wuz juvenile...most of it didnt rhyme...your concepts were whack...and where's tha flow?...damn son take my advice...sit back an spit it to ya self...can you spit dat?...1

[Klepto]

honestly ...i think that u need more vocan and wordplay...and learn how to rhyme better ...no hate..pz