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    Thoughts Of Love

    Just wrote a quicky right here.....enjoy

    My thoughts of you expand my emotions til you cant look no more
    Because in reality we clicked like seat belts, so this is what Im here for
    I cant really explain the feeling, i just have to show you
    And if i could your my presciption to my healing, love is what i go through
    Time is everything, but it seems it goes by so slow
    Because some things I want, i just have to let it go
    But i dont, cuz i know in some cases it may work
    Our friendship, may move into love....then we'll see how it goes first
    Sometimes I get so fixated by your personality, All i do is think of you
    And since you accepted my message, all my pain has gone through
    Out the door into life that has treated me wrong
    Because i knew i'd find somebody that was meant for me all along

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    GOOD emotion homie!...i can relate to this poem!..good rhyming concept for this kinda drop!..(you still aint better then me at poems)<<just fukkin but i wanted this to be longer!..it kept me reading!...overall i give this...8/10!...good shit...shoulda made it longer!...description good and Imagery..meh...flow on point...!...Keep droppin
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    nice poem, i like how it ended positively (not as gloomy as what i've seen lately). I can read it and say "ahhh, nice" instead of "oooooo noooooooooo" lol. Good job
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    Thanx for the feedback people...uppin for more feed

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    yo that was really deep man liek good job and nice drop

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    Quote Originally Posted by FreeVerse
    nice poem, i like how it ended positively (not as gloomy as what i've seen lately). I can read it and say "ahhh, nice" instead of "oooooo noooooooooo" lol. Good job


    right right an free??? i think that would be a sick rap name but the poem was great

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    This is a good poem especially since ppl can relate to this kinda stuff. and the rhymes were in tune. I agree with lyrically insane to make it longer so that we may read on to what else you have to say but overall nice work!

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    I agree...and i just stopped i dunno why...i think i was side tracked or something...lol uppin

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    Anymore people....uppin for more feedback plz

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    once i read just the first couple lines i knew this would be a good read.. the emotion was tremendis.. i ono how to spell that word.. but anyways.. i think this piece was great.. and if it was quick, id love to see the results if you took your time on it.
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    HoF x5

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    it was beautiful, wut more can i say
    "Fighting is half the battle and the stength comes from the struggle"

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    Thanx Diverged and Lil Soja...appreciated..lol oh and Diverged...this is how you spell it

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    Anyway I'll be droppin some more, so look out for some...

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    i like this man, immo make sure to peep ur next drops
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