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    Rated R......Keep Up!...

    One More Pill, One More Pill, One More Pill
    Substance Still One More Pill, Another Will
    Cure The Bill

    One More Pill, One More Pill, One More Pill
    Fuck it Still, Who Will Notice? None Will
    Just One Pill

    No; Not a Pill Popper, I'm a Feeble Messenger
    Not Heart-Stopper-Dropped-her, I Was Carressing Her
    Jumped From the Space Saucer, Now All My Blessings Cured
    Pestered Hood Rest Assured She Was Turned Self Leizure
    Heart in Freezer. Wonder "She Sure?" Guessed! Release Her!
    Anything to Please her, Went for a Ciggerrette
    Not Relations Breather, Now My Lungs are Collapsed
    And All Collabs Kiss Ass, All Cold Hags Are Gold Scraps
    I Dont Shop For No Crap; No Point in My Souls Past
    Like Jolly Santa Clause Without His South Pole Staff
    Its Not "Where You Headed": Its "Where've you Peddled?"
    "Ever Before Settled?" "Was Once Again Intended?"
    "Splendid; Lets Pretend This true Until We Get Old"
    Or until I've Left Told Fuck Off From This Meadow
    The Type To Keep Head Low From the "Set?Go" Retro
    Form of dating Wreck Show; Blue Waters Now Red Row's
    Resembling Dead Rose Thorns. Not Moses Splitting
    Pedestrian Feet Bring Blood Drips From the Lifting
    of the One-Two, Right Left, March Across, Exhale, Breath
    Inhale Drag, Ignore Pest, Now Across Exhiled Self
    Notice but Excuse Death There For the Twentieth
    Man to Cross The Thorn Path, You No more than Nineteenth.
    Previous Like Mine. Teeth Clenched Crossing the Pine Wreath
    Now Done, this a Fine Seat, Examine: Dying Feat
    Still Weak and Can't Stand Yet, Remainings Examined
    None Survive Their Planned Shit When Crossing this Landfill
    So Show Schemes You Grand Pill; Me? Im tryna Ban Will
    But If My Name brand Skill Flips Bitch, Gets me banned: iLL
    Female Pro Ettiquit, Touch: Proper Delicuit
    Love: Is there better Shit? Dont Care I'd Rather Quit!
    To Me Not Relavant, You I'm Not helping It
    On Cue Sedative Story Refreshing Bit
    Same Shit Nother EarLobe, Lies Caught in a Tear Scope
    Yes Some Got their Gear Roped, Others Quarter Year Joke
    I Fear Hope, Damn The Jerk Ahead Hitting on Clerk
    Hot Female. Im Still Working on my Syllabis
    So Far its Filled With Lips, Fucking Lisp Killed by Kiss
    Stomach love: What it is? Fetish Acts Till I'm Stiff;
    Nah, Its Smarter To Stop before i Wake Bubs and Miss
    Smart to Stop? Am i Bitch? No: Neither Glorious
    Nor That Rich, So I'ma Forever Turn like Knobs
    Its Not My Arteries, It's My Heart Filled with Glob
    When It Comes To Splittin Thoughts: Moses With a Pair
    of Hedge Clippers Couldnt Have Done A Better Job


    Rated R: R-A-P; So Infront Goes the C
    Now I Write To Turn Free, And Share with Nobody
    Crap To You, But To Me Its Rhythm And Poetry
    Street Poet, Fuck Those Who Think I Get oFF With Ease


    Where'd These Taunting Pills Go? I'll Check The Assylum
    That's Where the Guys From That Sold them to My Dumb
    And Shy Numb Skull. Why Stunned? I'm just Getting Fine Hun....
    The Question is Why Shunned? Never Looked When I'm Glum
    So Check The Arrival, I Know the Departure
    Free unSure Kids You Lure, Save The Headaches You Cure
    I Need To Restructure. Fuckit. Now No Longer
    Never The Stronger So it's Time to Ponder
    Will Obnoxious Thunder Again Raise the Wonder
    Or Is the Above Neck Dome Ready to Explode?
    Fuck You Those I've Help Float, Dungeon Keeper Hex Code
    Transformed from the Best Toad, No Prince In This Pests Hole
    Formerly On Journeys Like the Rest on Jurys
    Now Aside Attorneys Explaining She Hurt Me
    The world has turned Blurry, I Dont have a Pad Left
    My Eyes do Not Sag Yet, Version isnt Sad Self
    I'm Obliged to Hand it: I Laugh When Roasters Roast
    There's More In My Satchlet If i want Sober Closed
    Im Another Stabbed Vet That Fortunes Broham Chose
    You All Name The Tablet, Label it Overdose
    But its called Lament With Questions Also Posed


    Rated R: R-A-P; So Infront Goes the C
    Now I Write To Turn Free, And Share with Nobody
    Crap To You, But To Me Its Rhythm And Poetry
    Street Poet, Fuck Those Who Think I Get oFF With Ease

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    that was some dope shit man i was really feeling that stuff man good job.

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    tru...but it seems like u always have the same thing to say to everything i see you in......NEways.....uppin......

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    uppin in this bitch.....respond to my shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    it was aight it was off en on











    8/10 not bad

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    you need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed. thanks.

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    damn son! lyrics are wild! you really know what u doin when you spittin. i really liked it. your style somethin i never heard befor, somethin new. i think you took the words and ran wit em. keep up wit it. till then, lata and luck!peace

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    tru thanx for the feedback.....its my life i betta be good at it.......lol.......uppin for more......

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    Could it have been any longer!? Not bad......or anywhere close to bad. A few lines got me confused on the topic, but that's cuz I can't think straight right now. Nice shit, love tha flow. Keep it up

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    u truly must be on some dog...this was sick eventhough I must admit I did not understand everything....the flow seemed to be choppy here and there but I think that's because u tried to make them lines alike in length....u really went crazy on this one....props


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    tru i love this........it was somethin to get me back into tha game.......uppin.................

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