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    Will You Read This?.......More Truth

    I flew through the hours
    Thumbing through yellowed pages
    Pondering the collected teachings
    Of the long forgotten sages
    I sat in stillness
    In meditative trances
    Did my best without a guess
    Mimicking ancient dances
    I blew off my imposing orbit
    Challenging my chances
    All the while ignoring
    The condescending glances
    I controlled my breath
    And then I stilled my mind
    Felt the phantom vibrations
    Tingling in my spine
    I let go---Released
    Saw life for the very first time
    Hovering near the ceiling
    Like a light within a light
    But not quite right
    How high is higher?
    For an electro-magnetic flier
    Am I capable of writing
    The words that will inspire
    What more can I possibly say?
    A sarcasstic, skeptical philosopher
    Found out beyond the shadow of doubt
    First:
    There is life after life
    Second:
    God is real, alive, and well
    For the purpose of ontological argument
    God is Love, Truth, Me and You
    God is Energy, Light,
    Daytime at night
    God is the Kingdom of Heaven
    Inside you and all around you
    God is Consciousness,
    An Omniscient observer
    Can a fish explain the water in which it swims?
    God is an ocean of memories
    Knowing neither time nor distance
    Are you still waiting for a burning bush?
    Instead of demanding that God
    Should move heaven and earth for you
    Move yourself and witness
    The universe is in you
    God Bless
    Peace

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    aight, this was deep, some good thought put into it.....structure wise, i dont like how the lines were so short.....but thats me, i think it worked with this piece though and it was more poetic than anything....good job, im guessin you are catholic? haha, but yeah, not bad, good towards the end, loved the fish line, keep up man

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    nah i'm not catholic....i just like writin about this topic...its easy cuz i kno about it....uppin...............................

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