Thanks for the feed still uppin tho.
Thanks for the feed still uppin tho.
Bump
Bump..
Bump.
This was a very poetic piece, a good solid drop. your storytelling wasn't really needed here but you had emotion on point, and your expression of certain things did excel more than I expected. I liked the topic, there wasn't an awful lot to it but you lept it simple and thats what I liked. Your vocab and rhymes were both nice, but I could see them being a whole lot nicer, try using a few more multi's, just keep this up and you'll iron out the little wrinkles in time.
Maybe we could collab one day.
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Thanks for the feed still upping.
Bump.
Uppin for some more feed.
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