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    demonseed
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    ~~~my mirrors broken~~~

    You blame me for the debt.
    You blame me for the lost rent.
    You blame me just for the thrills.
    You cant even keep with our bills!

    You blame me cause you drink.
    You blame me when the bathroom stinks.
    You blame me for your moms lost cause.
    You get down on me so your friends will applause.

    I hate you more everyday!
    I hate you for so many more reasons I cant say.
    I hate you for what we have become.
    I cant stand when you say I make you feel dumb!

    I hate the fact that I have lost.
    I hate that you feel the need to floss.
    I hate that you urge to bust my balls.
    I cant stand when your drunk ass fuckin' mom calls!

    All and all, what we been through.
    I sit back...recollect ...what hasnt come true.
    All the while, I couldnt see.
    That the blame dont belong to...you...it belongs..to me?


    no this isnt my OWN drama..but inspired by an old roadie.
    HAte it up

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    Well I figured since you replied first to my piece. I'd reply first to your piece. Hm...sounds alot like mine. But at least it's not your own. LOL. I thought this piece was hilarious actually. It was a little dull with the repetition, but it got the point across. But all in all, it was pretty funny.
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    Don't ask me to vote on your battle cuz then it will not count and just be a waste on my time. Plus they just trying to fuck you over, because they gonna try to bullshit their way out of it if they don't get the vote. So fuck voting for battles cuz you're just screwing yourself.

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