Topical Takeover!

[Born To Kill]

TEN (10) LINES MINIMUM!!!

This is for heads who wanna elevate and hone their craft.
Please keep the weak, whack, and unwitty shit...to yourself!
Please try and come up with quality topics to leave the next person.
If you forget to leave a topic, don't post again, simply edit your original post and leave one.

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First Topic: Castration

[chronic0683]

messin wit my mind elevation
is like gettin a castration
u faded into the situation
not know'in ya menstrual achin
pacin in ya hospital room
are u ready to open up ya woom
boom out comes ya seed indeed
if you got ya elevation straightened
u wouldn't have to worry about a castration

next topic:car crash

[sabotage]

a swerve into the next lane
the ground being hit with rain
steering becomes hard 2 maintain
I brace myself for the presence of pain
Deafening sounds penetrate my ears
Across the pavement my blood smears
From loved ones come nothing but tears
Guilt is immortal and will haunt you for years

Next > Freedom

[Da YunG One]

freedom is a whole mindset its mental
like a beat witout words...an instrumental
experiemental...u neva really know da truth
they let me loose...but only in this phone booth
im in da booth...feelin da beat...but aint freein
cuz I still got chains on my feat and wrists when im peein
seein only darkness when im on da stand
parole board...thinkin I aint da man...I used ta be - Love, Stan

n/t woke up and u livin sum1 elses life

[~.Nise.~]

Wake up and yawn at the time of dawn..
Looked out a glass door just to see a big green lawn..
Is my mind gone?..eyes in my palms..
Goosebumps poppin' up on my body and arms..
With thoughts alarmed..felt a chill round my neck looked down to see a diamond charm..
Opened my vest.. just to see that I was armed with two techs..
Who would of guessed that my life changed for the best?..
Was I drug dealer, body guard, or just a straight killer?..
Assassinatin' for skrilla?...Why's God procrastinatin' on a nigga?..
Didn't mind to dine with wine..
But in the back of my mind I knew all this luxourious shit wasn't mine...

Next Topic: Suiten' up for a drive by..

Nise

So I'm thinkin' I'm blessed

[SlideShow]

I got my glock cocked,ski mask on my face/
drivin in tha tinted cadi,his bitch ass is gotta get wast-ed/
strapin on the vest,preparein for tha trip/
got my whole fuckin crew with me...this shits just began/
drive by the curb bang bang is the sound
our mission is complete this guys just hit the ground/

N/T=Your about to have sex with your girl and she ask you to shit on her.

[~.Nise.~]

Started kissin' and rubbin'..then she took my clothes off..
By then dick was so hard..it couldn't ever go soft..
She placed me on my back..did a tongue trick and asked me "Do you like that?"..
I replied back "yes"..she got up slow and started to undress with finess..
Hopped back on top and I started squeezin' on her chest..
Damn this is so good..thinkin' girl so hood..
Then she ask me if I would..If I should..
She said "shit on me baby!".. I was like "If you want me to I could"..
Layed her on her backside, that's right..she closed her eyes tight and I started to push..
Felt my gut swishin' round then out came some mush..some poop some shit..
All over the chicks nice ass round tits..she smothered it rubbed it oh she loved it..
She wiped my ass with her tongue like she dug it!..

Next Topic: Ninja style..sneak attack

Nise

[yellow]

im a ninja by day and god by night/
i got blood rights to the kings title//
equipped with sumaria swords and a rifle/
just triflying when i eat the asshole//
snuck in im waiting for two days/
no soap or cologne under my clothes/
cause the scent could give me away//
yeah im experienced and mastered/
since elementary don't you hear that/
its yellow man he's back. "He's back?"/
you'll don't peep nothing though/
till i expose myself from the deep shadow//
out with your throat real silent like/
silencor man, you dead in the night//
now i got the right/
a bicentennial for your plight and/
a bonus for your eyes//

next topic: alone in the dark

[Zen 2 Sin]

Chrome sparks due to the result of my cold heart/
My brain waves in the dark/ Act as sonar/
Skin ya flesh Make Skull and Bone art/
Its best that you stay from these unknown parts/
Your soul'll get borrowed from corrupted loan sharks/
First a Flashing Light then your dome parts/
Like Diamond tipped honed darts/ Fuck your toned farce/
Because you'd probably like to see me Alone in the Dark/

[SlideShow]

put up a topic when your done dude

N/T Your at a club and your pants fall down in front of everybody (how do you react)

haha im such an asshole

[DyMoNiK]

i said my niggas dont dance...
we just pull up our pants...and then run away...
when im done ya pay...pull down my pants...??
gotta say son ya gay...chilling...killing...illing...
all of a sudden my pants are spilling...
down to the dance floor...pull down my pants more...
thats why i dont dance whore...

n/t you on ya block and shots rang out what you do?

[Born To Kill]

What do you mean, "clean it", TR?

[Johnny 6-feet]

I heard the bullets ring out like a bunch of angry bells
Dived for cover and time slowed, an instant in hell
Felt the air near my face start to shake with turbulence
The steel advanced, this could be my last breath, last chance
My life flashed before my eyes, i wasn't bleeding, not yet
And the images i saw didn't fill me with regret
The ground was closer now, something hummed by overhead
I saw the pavement at point blank, where the cover led
I hit the ground, time sped up i head footsteps running
And a siren from a sqaud car with the engine gunning


next topic: you're stuck in a queue and your mind starts to wander...

[Da YunG One]

The kid I sold dat 8 ball to was only like fifteen.....................
fuck this line is long no matter where I go I bring strife wit me.
this dyke behind me smells like ass...needin a shower.............
last gurl I fucked wanted to get fast, told her I needed a hour.
damn she was nice...black power babe...me white vanilla........
matter of fact as I think about it...maybe she was manilla.......
me a killa...wit my rhymes...cuz I dont carry no gat...jus lyrics.
line wont move and the lady givin instructions i dont hear it.....
fuckin gurl ahead of me aint neva herd of birth con-trol...........
got like 9 kids......her yougnest looks about a month old..........
she applyin for sum sort of welfare...but cant qualify...why?.....
well my rap career aint goin anywhere currently...wanna fly.....
yes im next..."FUCK YALL" I hear in the back...sum du wit a gun
didnt get the funds he needed...he trippin...im way too yung....
betta not...*blap blap* I took two in the chest...im clutchin.....
and to think...I jus wanted to get a salad and maybe a luncheon


n/t wut happends after dark...

[SlideShow]

The sun goes down,i sneak out
get with friends,go around town/
people driven too fast,murderers attack
smugglin crack,homeless people come back/
im just makin a list this not a freestyle of sorts
but after dark the things that happen
normally get you in court/
drivin by peoples houses,baseball bat in hand
smackin off mail boxes,and laughing again/
thats another thing that happens
it might seem in all fun/
but those are the things that happen
when theres a lack of a sun.

N/T You just lost all your cash in vegas