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    I sing the body electric. Maven.'s Avatar
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    You Dumbfucks Even Have The Topical Kid Writing A Diss...

    LoL.

    These dudes preach us falling off?
    I'm here to banish the myths
    y'all throw punches so old they should be written in hieroglyphs!
    Na~Ledge tries to show intelligence...too bad your verse just lacked it
    how you gonna diss a 16 year old by calling me geriatric?
    it's fantastic, really dude, throw more old people jokes at me
    even if your daddy was a doctor, your punches would still be ill-conceived
    it's clear to see you feel inferior to WP,
    shit, I would too if I was still textin on the net at 23!
    K9, it's sad when a 20 year old is the "up and coming" trooper
    Dawg's writin verses that need to be scraped up with a pooper scooper!
    I'm speakin truth here, just give up, I'm tellin ya
    because you can only write a decent piece by stealing from Metallica!!
    I clearcut these last two homotextuals & I got one tree to fell left...
    How can you be Word~Perfect if you can't even use the spell check?
    Like god damn man, I've heard of people getting dumb from smoking joints
    but every sentence of yours I read drops my I.Q. eleven points!
    And on top of your clear lack of a decent education,
    ...you're Non Centz....what's that say about your financial situation?
    Try to respond with a decent diss for once
    ...so you won't be dubbed a loser
    even if you gotta type that shit on a library computer.

    Just learn when to shut the fuck up.

    one link: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=180870
    two links: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=180923
    Last edited by Maven.; March 25th, 2005 at 03:23 AM
    wordperfect?
    ..o0Pure0o..

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    Wow Nice Piece Man, i Was Feeling The Flow Here, But Where's The Links???
    Still Out For Revenge....

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    yo Maven...i did not steal from metallica.it was a fictional collab.

    but you dumbass couldn't see this.
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    CAN YOU KICK IT? NO YOU CAN'T

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    Had nuthin better to do...so take this bitch

    Yo Mavon need tips to elevate?
    You couldn’t elevate if ya got wings strapped on yar body
    You invertebrate,ya’s nobody…I castrate punks like you without a sweat,
    BoredPerfect…you couldn’t even rap the alphabet you faggot,
    I’d smoke ya like a cigarette and sell ya ass on the black market,
    16-old…fuck hide under your blanket…you lame internet emcee,
    You couldn’t even write third grade poetry,furthermore battle me,
    I don’t have education?when you RB cunt can’t even fuckin count?
    Na’s 23?????now really watch your I.Q. drop,
    Fuckin brat…ya really can’t drop something yar proud of…do the math,
    One lame diss to Two?When we fuckin dissed your whole crew,
    .................................................. ........where does this lead at?
    Know ya a dumbass so I’ll be more explicit:no flow,now wordplay,no lyric,
    Surely cause of mass deficit of gray matter………………………period,
    And can’t conceal…reading yar stupid diss really was a dreadful ordeal,
    Downhill boy,cuz I drop pieces so ill they should put them in quarantine,
    And those rhymes ya deploy give new meaning to the word cloy,
    Who the kid now boy?you’re just mental…Shit,even your I.Q’s dumb,
    Accidental result of a broken reused condom know this is elemental:
    I could’ve defeated your punk ass even when still in my momma’s placenta.



    Stupid punk...Should've stayed complaining on yar crew's forum...elevate there quietly...not disturb us with your quest to stop writing shit...
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    A fictional collab?

    You are lame as all fuck...

    Wow
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    ^a concept ya can't understand?
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    Quote Originally Posted by K9_THESHIT
    ^a concept ya can't understand?
    You kids take text way too seriously...


    Buy a mic and stop sucking
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    Na~Ledge tries to show intelligence...too bad your verse just lacked it
    how you gonna diss a 16 year old by calling me geriatric?

    it's clear to see you feel inferior to WP,
    shit, I would too if I was still textin on the net at 23!
    -could have been ill, but i'm 22

    The rest was ehh. Response is coming.....dumbass.
    Last edited by Na~Ledge; March 25th, 2005 at 12:11 PM

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    dis piece was aiight....tha disses was nice...punches was nice...overall nice shyt b...EZ

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    maven, good job.
    its great when our topical kids slay the competition.!
    fastforwords.>>
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    Quote Originally Posted by K9_THESHIT
    ^a concept ya can't understand?
    not when you just use their lyrics for a hook in your text, no. Want to do a metallica cover? Buy a guitar, take a lesson or two and record it.

    And if you're gonna drop lame ass comebacks at me that don't even flow, make your own thread. At least Na was cool enough to give me some feedback, you're just being a cunt.
    wordperfect?
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    hahah i like this


    gangsta shit right hurr...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Maven
    not when you just use their lyrics for a hook in your text, no. Want to do a metallica cover? Buy a guitar, take a lesson or two and record it.

    And if you're gonna drop lame ass comebacks at me that don't even flow, make your own thread. At least Na was cool enough to give me some feedback, you're just being a cunt.
    Said in my "writings of..." it was nothing personal.and as for the metallica cover i just wanted to do it.i don't know to play the quitar,don't have a musical voice...but just love the song and wanted to do it.don't you have any songs beside rap songs you like?and is it lame to do a cover on a song you really love?just say your thoughts on the topic with the artists...
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    and forgot to say...so i wouldn't be a cunt.when i wrote the diss i was extremly busy and didn't have time to drop a feed on your diss.plus i wanted to drop one,just in despite.now for the review:
    first waht i didn't like:the line about biting from metallica,u went wrong there cuz it said in my titile fet metallica.i didn't bite and you know this.
    "K9, it's sad when a 20 year old is the "up and coming" trooper
    Dawg's writin verses that need to be scraped up with a pooper scooper!"-didn't quite like it olso
    what i liked was the line when u said:"....I read drops my I.Q. eleven points!"...i don't need to explain why i didn't use spell check till now,but just know that using spell check doesn't make you smart.we all make mistakes when we type and when we rewrite what we've written we rarely see them.
    Mavon,you're not that a good of a disser too.concentrate and you will drop good OM's.Peace man.
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