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yay i finnaly get a belt shot...lol... time for me to actually try... cause Rep...seriously... i jus been fuckin wit the opponets u put me against till now...
Last edited by D.o.T.; July 28th, 2002 at 07:35 PM
wishin ya luck kid, but i don't want this title anymore, how do i get another one???????
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Good luck Eck...take this shit...1
thanks dunny
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*life aint a sprint but a marathon, runnin on ya sentances,
*ya effort's present..buuuut..ya talent's absent-kid..
*YOU WACK! but expressin-it with emphisis is irrelevent..
*learn ya words! vocabulary definitions indefinate,
UNINTELLIGENT!..*but ya verse SPEAKS for ITSELF!,>>
*from the pure simplicity of ya text to your personal stupidity~INDEPTH..
THINK ABOUT IT!!
*mis-directed repititions, dis-respectin ya reputation
*ya effort-wasted, omnipotent flow, scattered in several-places
*unreadable, 'read it?' in fact I DIDNT EVEN..writin a testament..i'll FUKK you up EARLIER than ADAM and EVE-DID..*geez-kid, quit rebellin you've explored wack's limits, *we're all ENTITLED to STUPIDITY, but you ABUSIN THA PRIVLEDGE!..god wasted precious time constructin your *existance..burn in hell b/tch, gettin raped by devils dicks..you finished..!!
*actually, im feelin a bit malicious..imprison this misfit midget while whippin children who refuse to labour..KILL *YOURSELF,..pleease, do us a favor...so i guess it HURTS to HELP!, WISEST thing you can manage is a BURP or BELCH..
*unworth of mother-nature, really, you dont deserve-her,
BEGGIN for BRAINS kid you must be a SLOW LEARNER..
*i put lyrical invalids in slipknots, better edit ya spit kid, my lyrics is like glocks...
*get out this league and start ya own league - the Special Olympics of Hip Hop..
*now study my style & get inspired by pure innovation...
...whoever the hell you tryna spit like, it's a poor imitation!!
time to break it down a little bit
& straight clown this little shit
*cats sleep on ya - narcoleptic cuz ya rhymes are sedatives..
*and your votes?? betta thank God for aim & private messages!!...
*bet you'll bite this tightness & swipe my newest scriptures
*damn kid, you even got more "bitch moves" than strippers!!..
**ima DISLEXIC MURDERER, make sure this NEWBIE-HURTS
single spits devour spirits, killed ya soul with this ill verse
iight i am gonna be ghost on wed...so here my verse
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u wanna nuther title u gotta relinquish that one after this week dawg, talk ta rep.
Peace.
After this cat he'll be a "synonym for cucumber" (Vegitable)
he got 2 much time wit "more posts" than "member number"
he get's dumber and i know i might sound shady man
but i gotta make like wrestlin... no belts held by canadians...
got his "thurst for fame" leave-un
by spottin out jus cause he "uses *Stars" he'll "neva be one"
doesn't make me shutter
knowin he "hyphened" his name cause this cat has a "studder"
this title's my goal
and my streak proves i'm like butter... on a roll...
he can't "bear" to admit he's "dead" and fadin
tryin to spit "sweetness" but he's not "Walter Payton"
how come his name's "eck-lipse" but he gettin "sonned"
he "sick" cause i'm so "cold" i got his "sences numbed"
guess this cat listen's to "pop" and thinks he's "with it"
cause he got a "sexual disorder" that we call a "limp bizkit"
i got his "Kandi" and love that "ho"
cause i can "whip out a limp dick" and she'll "taste the rainbow" (Skittles)
Ecclipse took this one. His punches hit harder and rhyme scheme was more intricate. Dot needs to fine tune his rhyme scheme and reword his punches a lil betta and he'll be straight(constructive feedbacc). Keep elevatin.
i know i wasn't fealin this verse either
both were horrible.. so horrible this doesn't deserve my vote.. sorry..
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...amazing... that post was pointless...
ECK-LIPSE::
life aint a sprint but a marathon, runnin on ya sentances,
*ya effort's present..buuuut..ya talent's absent-kid..
NOT BAD OF AN OPENER,I FELT THE SETUP WAS WAY BETTER THAN THE PUNCH,I FEEL YOU SHOULD MAKE THEM EQUAL OR THE PUNCH MORE POWERFUL,BUT NONETHELESS GOOD
YOU WACK! but expressin-it with emphisis is irrelevent..
*learn ya words! vocabulary definitions indefinate,
OK,NOT REALLY LIKEING THE VOCAB,BUT COOL
UNINTELLIGENT!..*but ya verse SPEAKS for ITSELF!,>>
*from the pure simplicity of ya text to your personal stupidity~INDEPTH
I WAS FEELING THIS,NOT TOO HARD BUT ALSO NOT EFFECTIVE,DECENT SHIT
mis-directed repititions, dis-respectin ya reputation
*ya effort-wasted, omnipotent flow, scattered in several-places
OK
*unreadable, 'read it?' in fact I DIDNT EVEN..writin a testament..i'll FUKK you up EARLIER than ADAM and EVE-DID..*geez-kid, quit rebellin you've explored wack's limits, *we're all ENTITLED to STUPIDITY, but you ABUSIN THA PRIVLEDGE!..god wasted precious time constructin your *existance..burn in hell b/tch, gettin raped by devils dicks..you finished..!!
TOO ME THIS WAS COOL,BUT SOME PARTS STRETCHED AND FORCED,BUT NOT BAD
actually, im feelin a bit malicious..imprison this misfit midget while whippin children who refuse to labour..KILL *YOURSELF,..pleease, do us a favor...so i guess it HURTS to HELP!, WISEST thing you can manage is a BURP or BELCH..
ALSO NOT BAD,NOT HARD NOT EFFECTIVE EITHER
unworth of mother-nature, really, you dont deserve-her,
BEGGIN for BRAINS kid you must be a SLOW LEARNER..
SORTA FUNNY,OK
i put lyrical invalids in slipknots, better edit ya spit kid, my lyrics is like glocks...
*get out this league and start ya own league - the Special Olympics of Hip Hop..
HAH GOOD FLIP ON THE CONCEPT,NOT BAD AT ALL,IWAS FEELING THIS
now study my style & get inspired by pure innovation...
...whoever the hell you tryna spit like, it's a poor imitation!!
TOO BASIC
cats sleep on ya - narcoleptic cuz ya rhymes are sedatives..
*and your votes?? betta thank God for aim & private messages!!...
AGAIN NOT BAD,SETUP WAY OVERPOWERS THE PUNCH,MAYBE IF YOU REWORDED THE PUNCH WOULD OF BEEN MORE EFFECTIVE
bet you'll bite this tightness & swipe my newest scriptures
*damn kid, you even got more "bitch moves" than strippers!!..
NICE HERE,HIT HARD
**ima DISLEXIC MURDERER, make sure this NEWBIE-HURTS
single spits devour spirits, killed ya soul with this ill verse
NOT FEELING THE ENDING,NEED TO REMEMBER TO HIT HARD HERE,MAKE THE READER LOVE IT
D.O.T.::
After this cat he'll be a "synonym for cucumber" (Vegitable)
he got 2 much time wit "more posts" than "member number"
NOT FEELING THIS OPENER,SETUP WAS WEAK,I GOT WHAT YOUR SAYING BUT IT WAS WEAK,THEN YOU CAME WITHA BAD PUNCH
he get's dumber and i know i might sound shady man
but i gotta make like wrestlin... no belts held by canadians...
I FELT THIS,I WATCH WRESTLING AND I GET THIS,SO NOT BAD
got his "thurst for fame" leave-un
by spottin out jus cause he "uses *Stars" he'll "neva be one"
NOT FEELING THIS EITHER,NOT HITTING HARD OR EFFECTIVE
doesn't make me shutter
knowin he "hyphened" his name cause this cat has a "studder"
BLAH AT THIS
this title's my goal
and my streak proves i'm like butter... on a roll...
OK,BUT PLAYED SHIT
he can't "bear" to admit he's "dead" and fadin
tryin to spit "sweetness" but he's not "Walter Payton"
I KNOW WHERE YOUR GOING HERE,BUT NOT FEELING IT,SORTA SIMPLE SHIT,NOT HITTING HARD
how come his name's "eck-lipse" but he gettin "sonned"
he "sick" cause i'm so "cold" i got his "sences numbed"
AGAIN NOT FEELING THIS SHIT,NOTHING HITTNG HERE
guess this cat listen's to "pop" and thinks he's "with it"
cause he got a "sexual disorder" that we call a "limp bizkit"
SORTA FUNNY,BUT NOT EFFECTIVE OR HARD
i got his "Kandi" and love that "ho"
cause i can "whip out a limp dick" and she'll "taste the rainbow"
NOT FEELING THE ENDING,THE SETUP WAS REALLY WEAK,PUNCH NOT BAD,I LIKED IT,BUT PLAYED,NEED TO COME HARD HERE
UMM I HAVE TO GIVE THIS TO ECKLIPSE,HE HAD MORE HARDER PUNCHES,DOT YOU CAME REALLY WEAK THIS TIME AROUND WITH ALOT OF WEAK PUNCHES TOO BASIC SHIT MAN,NEXT TIME COME HARDER OR POST EARLIER.
VOTE ECKLIPSE,YO MAN CUT DOWN ON MOST OF THAT USELESS VOCAB IT WEAKENS THE FLOW AND PUNCH,USE VOCAB ONLY A LITTLE AT ATIME
ECK-LIPSE- 5-0
D.O.T.- 3-2
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