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    iNFiNiTE A
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    heretiC...

    about 2 months ago i wrote this amazing song for another site.. it made me on that site ... ms heretic..... and it was so nefarious and evil but the site went under and i tired to write w/e i had so here goes nothing...

    heretiC..

    yo I guess it all started back in ccd class
    when I burned a bible n stuck a crucifix up my teachers ass
    [your in big trouble] why father? its funny people laughed
    [your going to hell your decending fast!]
    thank you finally I can leave this church and go home
    [I knew you were da devil repent atone!]
    fuck no get outa here have some fun rape a nun
    be a man leave little boys alone hit a home run
    [my word] my word whut word up [what?]
    sister linda's a slut [good god you’re nuts!]
    not really just insane inane sometimes a bane
    but im doing this o entertain not to cause pain
    so a sed fuck it and walked down a corridor
    crosses for decor, i cant take it no more!
    AHHH so than i ran as fast as i can...
    then bumped into a gay man god daaammmnnn!
    sorry i hope ur not da pope man but dat wood be dope
    u know funny a joke but i gotta go
    then i stumbled into a room it had a pantry n a sink
    so i took the holy grail and had a lil drink
    drinkin all day in class the wine made me tipsy
    just lik the crosses i hang upside down and flipsy
    [O lord save us its satan] OOO! where he at?
    [THERE!] who me? no but close hey cutie lets chat.. [NOOO]
    so i hooked up wit an alter boy in a confession booth
    screw repenting this place has an entire different use
    so i left the alter server unholy and perplexed
    i mean, preist screw boys he should be used to sex
    to top it off laughing hysterically i set the chuch on fire
    then i got on the mic and rapped with the choir
    and i sed screw this cult religion and the cathlic church!
    all those stupid commandments and pope john paul the 1st!

    sorry god! but u have to admit it was hilarious!!

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=180305
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=180330

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    gotta say girl, feelin ya on ya shit lol , buh yo flo seemed hot as i rapped it out loud...seemed pretty str8 ta me, jus a few lines i think can b alil betta an tha endin a lil...buh i still think itz hot, keep droppin em girl 1

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    iNFiNiTE A
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    Uppin!

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    iNFiNiTE A
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    NOTHING.. wow.. im very surpirsed

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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    i must admit im amazed at your work very well composed and thought out
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    iNFiNiTE A
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    finally some replys..

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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    why not yeah you slept on and it happens here often but your talent will speak for itself
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    wow. i thought it was okay. i'd to see you spit this to a christian audience though (lol). stay hungry, keep droppin'em.

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    iNFiNiTE A
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    damn right!
    ATTENTION ALL MCs ITS NOT THAT HARD TO READ A POST AND REPLY!

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    hey if you can hit my new work up its long but its dissing some herbs trying to diss me
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    Uppin!

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    Lacks complex rhymes....
    And throw in some vocab.
    Otherwise it was a pretty good written.

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    iNFiNiTE A
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    iight thanx for the advice..

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    Re: heretiC...

    This is amazing if you ask me. This is because of the way that people are here, and they need to know more about it on pay someone to write your paper. They are doing something that only I know about.

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